|Reviews for Lily's List|
| Randomadness chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Love it, honey! I like your Lily. She's how I always imagined she'd be, right from the start! Great job, and keep it up!
| issyy chapter 41 . 8/19/2009
great great great story!
| aquarene chapter 6 . 8/19/2009
aw i LOVE the part with James and Lily 3
and nicely done! really awesome! i liked how you switched scenes and all ;)
| aquarene chapter 3 . 8/19/2009
that was really good :) thw writing overall is aewsome.
Its just that Lily seems too stuck up and snobby [by hitting James and screaming every 5 mins]
pther than that, its good :)
| Sfreedom chapter 36 . 8/16/2009
you sud hav check ur facts, the REPUBLIC of Ireland is not a part of britian, nd a lot of peopl wud find tat deeply insultin considering tat ireland was freed frm british rule during the irish revolution.
if you ever read abt the torture, discriminatn, murder, eviction, hangings,rape, starvation tat the british did 2 d irish through history whilst the british "ruled".
you sud check it up on the internet, r u sud watch the film 'the wind tat shakes d barely' which is abt how the irish revolted against d british.
| ADC chapter 4 . 8/10/2009
going a little fast, dont you think?
| ADC chapter 3 . 8/10/2009
this is the funniest story i ever read!
| meltedhappiness chapter 41 . 8/10/2009
YAY! GOOD STORY!
| hpluvr96 chapter 41 . 8/9/2009
OMFG! i waited until the end 2 review cuz i amw eird! but i love this! i cried i laughed and omg it was just amazing! u should publish it! it is that good!
| DamageReport chapter 3 . 8/7/2009
You should've done a time skip. Their spellwork is practically N.E.W.T. level. Besides, their behavior is so pubescent.
| DamageReport chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
O! I, for one... would LOVE a bad Lily. And isn't the button green?
| hollogram chapter 41 . 8/2/2009
First, let me start by saying, I hate my life. I just wrote a very long review depicting exactly how I felt about this, and when I sent it, I had been in a place with no internet connection, so I lost the whole thing. This may not be as long or as sweet as the other one because I'm a bit annoyed at the moment.
So I found this story last night on someone's favorite stories. I read until 4 the morning, resumed reading at 4 and finished the story by 5:20. And let me start by saying this story has personally touched me. I know that many people have read this (1,180 comments!) and this comment may not be special, but your writing made me feel like you were writing this just for me. Your perceverance is awe worthy and writing style is amazing. You probably know this already, but you wrote a near 650 page novel (50,0 words200 pages) it's longer than most of the Harry Potter novels anyway.
I cried multiple times, not only when Marlene died ( though i had to stop reading then, i was bawling), but i cried of happiness when James proposed, then when you switched to Harry and Ginny I was laughing and crying at the same time. I cried when Sirius said "But James has always looked at her that way" in response to Marlene saying all the boy looked at Lilly like they were charmed. I cried with Adam Becker ( both times) and was crying the first time i wrote this ( now I'm a bit too annoyed to cry) just because I knew they'd die, that the story was over, and they deserved to be together after all they'd been through.
Even though JK Rowling thought up the names of the characters, some of their personality traits and history, you gave the characters real personalities. You gave them life. I never would have imagined Sirius exactly like that, he-you made me laugh so many times with his teddy bear cluelessness and he made me cry when he was actually deep, because that meant that something hd touched this childish soul, pierced through it and got to him. I was in hysterics when he cried that single tear that made it look like Marlene was crying too. He deserved to be happy. I loved the personalities I never imagined, combined, would have created Neville Longbottom :P. Your most impressive character was Lilly. We had little information on her, and you gave her a whole personality that fit right in to the story line. James was amazing, mostly because of the patience anyone could see you needed to make him mature so slowly.
You are my favorite author, not only on fanfiction, which is what I think you should seriously consider doing as a profession. If you write something, you already have a bunch of people here that would red whatever you wrote, including me. Please message me when you publish your first book.
Thank you for writing.
PS: I was listening to this the whole time I read, it reminded me of James :D
| glittergal92 chapter 41 . 7/31/2009
well that took me a good 3 days to read all of that. Amazing! by far the best Lily/James story I have ever read. now I'm going to see what else you have written!
| 3547805892627482245 chapter 7 . 7/16/2009
I really liked this chapter, but I don't understand why you've put "LILY SPEAKING" in the paragraphs where she talks about James. I think you should give your readers a bit more credit, they have the capacity to understand that Lily is still talking.
Sorry, now I've said that I'll carry on reading!
| Hayley chapter 41 . 7/15/2009
Oh my gosh! That was an AWESOME story! It rocked! I have NO criticism!