Reviews for Chrysalis
Sovereign Violette chapter 23 . 4/4/2013
It was an absolutely fantastic read! Good job :) Please make more HarryxDraco romances 3
ReighHPFiction chapter 23 . 11/10/2012
This was probably one of the better and more unique Harry/Draco fics I've ever read. The idea of de-aging was used very differently than usual, and I was glad to see the slow development of their relationship. Everyone was kept very well in character as well, which is a big petpeeve of mine lol

That being said, I'm kind of disappointed that there's no love scene. This fic is rated M, which usually means there'll be some sort of love scene. After such a brilliantly written romance and the buildup of their desire for one another, it was highly disappointing not to see one. I know the site doesn't allow explicit scenes, but a lot of authors still get away with it, and the scene didn't have to be rated X or anything. Just something sexy to tie it together.

The fic itself is great the way it is, I just think it could've been rated T without any problems. It isn't like there's any coarse language, and there's no blood or gore. So rating it M makes it seem to promise more than you deliver.

Other than that, the store was great. I will definitely bookmark it.
ForeverRainingFire chapter 23 . 10/31/2012
Great story! I really enjoyed it! I thought the ending was especially well done!
Guest chapter 23 . 7/18/2012
I loved the story. It was so cute how they were together.
You wrote very well.
kisses
Gothic Lust chapter 23 . 7/17/2012
Lols. That was funny!
LovelyKnight chapter 23 . 6/21/2012
Ha! Famous last words... Silly Lucius.
Lori94 chapter 23 . 5/15/2012
LOL! Love it! I wondered what Lucius would say about Draco's renovations! LOL!
SindaCelva chapter 23 . 5/1/2012
A very different and exciting story, I really liked it!
Drarrytheusinkableship chapter 23 . 4/7/2012
That was beautiful. I have no other words for it. This story was just so simple and easy to follow not too much angst or action get me?
need a delete account option chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
I really like what you did with this. A really good and new swist on de-aging. Lovely. :)
Belle A Lestrange chapter 23 . 12/26/2011
haha I loved Lucius' closing line, perfect!
Belle A Lestrange chapter 22 . 12/26/2011
Oh why damnit? now draco will have to live alone with the memory of that one kiss
Belle A Lestrange chapter 20 . 12/26/2011
Should have known it was pansy.
Belle A Lestrange chapter 18 . 12/26/2011
I love how this chapter contrasts with the last one so with the happy moments, and the angered ones x
Belle A Lestrange chapter 16 . 12/25/2011
ah so sweet
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