Reviews for Slave of the Heart
kuromi123 chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
Awwwwwww, the ending was perfect, I love it XD
Kamy-chan chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
Never EVER thought about this pairing, but the end was so fucking cute :)
Turtle Kid the Woolgatherer chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
I was skeptical when this began, but you managed to change my mind. And you brought Ling into the anime-verse! Good job! There needs to be more goof Ling-action in fanfiction. (Nice dynamics between royalty and slaves, by the way.)
reena chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
HRGN keep on writing keep on writing keep on writing keep on writing keep on writing keep on writing keep on writing keep on writing keep on writing PLEASE.

I recently discovered this fic and when I finished, I was expecting another chapter, but then, you STOPPED.

How could you? It was only one chapter -bottom lip wibbles- PLEASE continue this fic, it has a lot of potential and I really REALLY want to keep reading.

...please update?
Calla chapter 1 . 12/6/2008

BRILLIANCE! That was so...Interesting to read and fun and, to me, had a sexy feel to it. Rawr

...Please write more on this couple..or some sort of continuation or something!(Unless you have...I haven't checked out LJ yet.)
Ima Super Mute Ant chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
Wow! This was so beautiful! Well written and complete, not to mention ling/al is such a unique pairing. I adored this story, absolutly!

PrincessZidet chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
coo's and squeals* That beautiful _; It was a rather late review..but ..its better late then never right? I had a wonderful time reading it all. *gives you a cookie*
Shadow's Illusion chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
Shadow: Oh, that was just adorable!

Illusion: Yeah, Ling's SO dreamy.

Shadow and Illusion: Sigh... (dreamy look)

Ling: I can tell you, those two are hoplessly lost in there own little world called "Idiocy", "Insanty", and "Too Much Caffine With Sugar".

Al: I liked the story. (blush) Well, not EVERY part of it.

Shadow and Illusion: Yes, wonderful indeed! (dreamy sigh...again)

Ling and Al: (look at eachother confused) Right...
Cayenne chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
Wow. I honestly didn't expect much out of this fic, but decided to read it out of curiousity. I'd never seen a Ling/Al before. This was amazing. I started off reading not expecting to enjoy the pairing (being a diehard AlWinry myself), but this was just too well written not to like. Congratulations, I believe this to be one of the better FMA fics out there.
xxxAptamIxxx chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
Velvet Mace! *bows* I am not worthy,i am not worthy. Sry needed to get that out my system. and btw please continue PETS i was afriad you might of abandoned it! Loved the story and Ling.

Luv ya

Epic Awsome chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
aw I really like this, i hope you continue it!
Hotomi chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
OMG This one was one of the best fics Ive ever read. I love Ling and I ADORE Alphonse. I liked his calm and obedient personalityj just like Als n_n Oh is it only a one-shot? I really enjoyed reading it. I added it to my favorites...