Reviews for Breakdown
animal freak17 chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
AWWWWW Thats sooo sweeet i absolutely LOVED IT!
Skymouth chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
Aaaaww! So sweet! My second fave OLS coupling! Jim is such a sweety!
Oranis chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
That was amazing...one of the best geneXjim fics I have read so far, hands down.

I really hope you continue with a sequel or an epilogue. I'd be very interested to see what happens to them after this.

If not, I hope to see similar works of yours in the future.

I really enjoyed this fic. Thank you so much for writing it.

-Oranis-
holdyourpeace chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
hmm... cherry on top of gene? KINKY! I LUV IT! WAHAHAHAHAHAHA! there needs to be more yaoiols stuff! this is the beest one ive read so far!
Ishikawa Ran chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
AW! That was sweet! I love these kinds of fics! Especially when there so well written like yours are!
-Ran Ishikawa
Ishikawa Ran chapter 1 . 7/21/2002
Me,ow: I like it! Continue? Gene Starwind... and Jim? Good thoughts! I...

Neko-Jim: Star? Where's the star? Catch the star! Catch the star! Catch the star! Catch the star!

Me,ow: There is no star...

Neko-Jim: Oh...

Me,ow: Here have your yarn ball...

Neko-Jim: Yarn? Where's the yarn? Catch the yarn! Catch the yarn! Catch the yarn! Catch the yarn!

Anji: What'd you feed him?

Me,ow: Ack! where'd you come from?

Anji: (Towel around her) Where do you think...?

Me,ow: That whole time?

Kefi: It tends to take her awhile...

Me,ow: Ack! where'd you come from?

Kefi: Video game center...

Me,ow: This whole time?

Anji: It tends to take him awhile...

Neko-Jim: (Rolling on the yarn ball) to get back into reality! WEEEEE!

Me,ow: We all liked the story... T.T'

Luv, Me,ow -_-'
Wiachi chapter 1 . 5/26/2002
Whooo! I've read this story before but it was on some website. It's definitly one of my favorites though! I've read it about 3 or 4 times! Excellent job!
DuoBat218 chapter 1 . 10/6/2001
Sure now when do i get my Gene? err Cherry. Hee hee. No anyways i liked this story. It was really very good and cold little Jim just seems so cute! Personally I think that Gene is too old for Jim, but hey overall I liked it!
oneechan19 chapter 1 . 10/4/2001
Oh my gosh. I had tears in my eyes. I don't know a lot about Outlaw Star, I just started watching it, but that was beautiful. ::sniff:: _ I loved it!
dbzgirl6 chapter 1 . 9/19/2001
sad story but very good
gelfling chapter 1 . 7/25/2001
*Claps wildly* Wow that was really sad and kind of angsty and then really super super sweet at the end. THANK YOU. I have achieved my sugar rush for the day.
Taiorami chapter 1 . 6/16/2001
I'm not sure what to say except I like it. Umm...yeah, that seems good for now.
Chaotic Serenity chapter 1 . 6/1/2001
Very nice! Nicely written and a very smooth rhythm and flow of words. Your detail could use a little work, but that's all. My biggest vice about this story, however, is Jim's age. I love shonen-ai and all, but I think allowing Jim to age a few years to develop and explore his orientation and comprehension of true love would have made the story a bit more realistic. Other then that, it's a wondeful story. You're going on my favorites list.
blueleopard87 chapter 1 . 5/27/2001
yea! happy ending! great fic! i loved it! now off i go to read the sequel! _
Anikishi13 chapter 1 . 5/16/2001
I cant believe it! Someone actually created a fic that wasn't sick but sweet. No corny sex scenes!YAH!

I just love Jim and Gene's bond and - sure, this takes it a step further- but it shows they care about each other. Thats the stuff I like to read! Great story! PLEASE WRITE MORE! PLEASE! Send me some e-mail, too.

Ya know how!

Anikishi13
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