|Reviews for This Song for You|
| Myrddin le Fay chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
| Wolfwind chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
Wow, this was touching. The way you wrote made the characters come to life in my mind. A very beautiful story.
| Frost-EVA-04 chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
Excellent. You made this very believable. Keep up the good work. Frost out.
| ERROR809 chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
very cute story, excellent job!
| EGBC chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
This is good too.
| Anonymous Joe chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
I very well written A/S one shot! Very good indeed. Yes you are right about them being OOC but for this type of writing they NEED to be OOC. But I try to give constructive criticism so I must say something negative. Uh... Well in some places the story got a little choppy but I think you already explained that. Otherwise a very good story! Keep up the good work!
Ich werde Sie später sehen!
P.S. Remember, as I always say, "It is YOUR STORY so you don't have to listen to me or ANYONE else!"
Also you have now been added to my fav. list.
| Darknemo2000 chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
Well..You've said it yourself - OOC is clearlyvisable in here... But it isn't that bad as I expected it to be...
Through bigger part of te story both characters were pretty in charcter and only last parts turned them OOC...
Too sweet, too much of sugar...WEll you get the point - a real NGE would never end up like this...
Nevertheles for a sweet one-shot fic its pretty good... Besides AxS is always the best...
Nice job as always...
| koinekid chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
Nicely written little fic. Just one thing. In the third paragraph where you write, "Producing the cello from its respective case..." you may be using the word incorrectly. The word respective usually can be used in this context: "Asuka and Shinji took their instruments from their respective cases..." meaning Asuka removed her instrument from her case, and Shinji removed his instrument from his. There are other uses of the word, such as something worthy of or rendering respect. But this did not seem to be the context you were implying.
Keep writing. I'm adding you to my Author Alert list.
| AgentKaji chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
This is a really good one-shot. A nice take on that particular scene. Characters were well written, although they did get a little OOC at the end, but thats to be expected seeing as where the fic was going.
Definitely not burnable trash, very much WAFF, which you've shown well. Very nice. [Thumbs Up]
"Don't hesitate, move ahead."
| Draknal chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
Yay! Awesome story. Asuka x Shinji forever! This wasn't too OOC, so I don't mind. Great job. Hope to read more work from you soon.
| J.G. The Gamer chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
I call it excellent. Well written. You got both their personalities down perfectly. You may think this is rubbish, but I think it is amazing. Likely I'll come back and read this again. I commend you for an excellent S/A oneshot.
| RahXephon chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
Just came to warn you that using lyrics from commercial songs is not allowed in (in the rules). Your fic probably risks being deleted.
| Forever Rahhel chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
Too bad that it was just an oneshot.
I would have loved to see the shocked faces of the
others, especially gendos, when he noticed his
szenario is totally messed up by these two.