Reviews for Heart Break War
xxunowhoxx chapter 3 . 5/4/2006
excellent can't wait for more if you do decide to write more
Falconwolf3 chapter 2 . 4/4/2006
Another story I love, you are very talented! GReat job!
Mika Lockheart chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
Ita not bad so far. I don't think Emma would really act in the manner you have her portrayed as, and I highly doubt Jesse would speak to her in that manner but other then that its a good story. Keep it up
imjuzakyd chapter 2 . 3/14/2006
*raises eyebrows* I don't think Jesse would react that way, or speak that way to Emma. I highly doubt it. Although he may feel more about Lexa, I will have to argue about the way he pushed Emma off. Emma's been part of his life for a longer time than Lexa,so dismissing her like that is highly improbable. Sorry, just being critical. :D
bohemianbabe chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
hey hon,

you've got a good start, sweetie, but I want to see this developed...fully developed! Next time I can get online we'll talk aobut this and your other stuff! It may be a while cause the computer at home is being very bad so I have to get online at school which means i'm only online once a day...and with out messenger.

love you and keep up hte good work!

melodie568 chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
really really good i like it and hope to read more. great job. poor lexa