Reviews for Of Paths to Repentance
Turk 4 Life chapter 8 . 1/28/2013
Seifer deserved that broken nose- he's beyond mean :O AND HE DESERVED ALL THE HUMILIATION ALONG WITH IT! :O How sweet though, Cloud's all "I wont let him touch you." towards the end :D Hmmm, but it was great that we got to see what Seifer was thinking :D a great way to end the story :) Hmmm I'm hoping for a continuation- however I don't wanna push you into writing something you don't have inspiration for :) So in that case I will read your other Squall/ Cloud fic (well i already read it, and if you can see by the reviews i left and the amount of time i used to read chapters/ type the reviews you can tell i pre-read the story before typing the review LOL thought I did have to speed read to gain my bearings back :P)

Moosh :)
Turk 4 Life chapter 7 . 1/28/2013
First of all- I was right, Cloud was playing hero until he got too cold LOL! How cute! Secondly, LEON WANTED CLOUD TO KISS HIM AGAIN THAT ANGELIC GODLIKE MAN! :D (hahahaha fangirl mode on- obviously) I love how you write these two characters, i mean they are so different to one another yet they fit like yin and yang!
Turk 4 Life chapter 6 . 1/28/2013
OH MY GOSH THAT PIG! HE HAS NO REMORSE FOR DOING WHAT HE DID?! THAT PIG! :( Oh well, at least Cloud decked him one :) And Leon's warm and in his dorm- sadly I don't think Cloud's gonna go there to look for him :/ cos he's Cloud and he's gonna try be a hero and wander around in the cold some more... LOL
Turk 4 Life chapter 5 . 1/28/2013
OMGOSH THEY KISSED! THEY KISSED! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! I AM SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW. Well I was happy... then the chapter ended with Seifer's name xD (no i don't completely hate the guy- it's just this story makes me strongly dislike his character completely!) He better not touch those two cuties :/
Turk 4 Life chapter 4 . 1/28/2013
Aww Leon :( don't be sad! HAHAHAH it's funny, I was reading a science article earlier today and it was talking about cloning neanderthals xD Just thought I'd throw that in there- biggest coincidence that it happened to be an insult directed at Cloud HAHA
Turk 4 Life chapter 3 . 1/28/2013
Ew again, Cloud had to TALK to Seifer O_O I have a feeling Leon knows what went down- he definitely knows Cloud didn't go to eat :/
Turk 4 Life chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
Ewww, it's Seifer... and right after a horrible test as well! Poor Cloud :( Poor Leon :O cos you know... what he did to Leon- that ass hole :/
Turk 4 Life chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Aww poor Cloud, he totes didn't study- at all. At least Leon's being a dear to him now :)
FullOfSugar chapter 8 . 11/14/2008
I loved the end, that was sweet, both holding their hands

And the way everything was so awkward between the two when Cloud came back to the dorm XD It was funny.

Anyway, making a Seifer-centric chapter was a very good idea in my opinion. Most of the time, the "Bad Guy", because he is the bad guy, is completely neglected, and so a reader can't really say "I know he was mean but I loved him anyway XD". It's a shame seeing that the bad guy is a fairly important character and I think an author needs to give that character as much attention and credibility as the other good characters. I think you can say that a "bad guy", like I call them, is successful when you can't help but being attracted to him despite his/her great cruelty and all coughYagamiRaitocough

My opinion only

Good story :)
x - painted.flames chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Mah, this story made me melt inside. -squee- It was so cute and yet angsty, and so wonderfully written! I loved every minute of it. Great job!
rintisku chapter 8 . 5/7/2008
so there will be a third or are you still thinking or will it be a sortof sequel and be after they graduate or will it be of seipher getting his revenge well i hope it is good and maybe have a happy ending
Kira-Chan chapter 8 . 5/15/2006
Huuhuhuhuhu... I liked how it started and I certainly liked how it ended!

Please do write more, you're good at it! o_-
Shadow Cat17 chapter 8 . 5/7/2006
I liked this ending, it wrapped up the story nicely!
Hito me Bore chapter 8 . 5/3/2006

Very nice way to end the story. A simple good night. It was sweet how they held hands until the mysterious effects of sleep forced them to release the simple gestrue!


But really, a great ending and I await the next story you start!
andromeda90 chapter 8 . 4/30/2006
this is so cool! i love it! because its so...cute! and...nice...and so much care and love in a non loving way...not those fullfy big time, its relationship status! how every thing came out and added up! and seifer, poor bastard...though he is one of my fav from ff8, but anywas, he deservesi t in this story! _ more! yes more! going to die if i don't get more! ah! anyways, luv ya! but my bed waist, and tomorrow, school...unless i'm one of those ditchers that won't go because of the whole May 1 thing, but anwyays, have a test tomorrow, so no...oh well, luv ya! ta!
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