Man I wish this story didn't end so quickly cause it was going good.
By the way I loved the first two chapters cause it was like reading about history but also like a story at the same time and if you could would you think about make a second one of this.

I say, this story was very fascinating! I will tell you that you need to write more! I have yet to check your reviews yet, but anyway, I thank you for writing this story, it was a great and interesting story, filled with what Civilization holds, Expansion... I wish you could write more, but alas, since this was based of Civilization 3, I suppose you most likely do not come on anymore, I hope that guess was wrong, but anywho, I wish for you the best, and I hope that you get back to writing.

Is this really based on an actual game, because I didn't think that internal disputes and factions existed.

Where are you getting these city names from? Lagash is the name of a planet in one of Isaac Asimov's short stories, Gaia is the Greek word for Earth, Delphi was an ancient Greek city, and I don't know where Umma comes from.

Nice War

That sounds just like the game.

loved your story...hope more of Gaia's history is on the way

Pretty good. To bad you didnt add the whole thing.

This is AMAZING, it is a very good story. I even make it my favorite story immediately. I read the whole thing from the beginning to the very end. I wish to write as good as that at least (any writing tips?). A sequal might be good too (How about encounter with another civillisation?). Why don't you check my profile and review my story (going to be posted soon). Hope we could be pals!

Well written, well executed. I like the historical tales, but I was put off by the long story of the new colony under the command of Delphi.