|Reviews for Katagâ|
| ReflectedGrace chapter 26 . 8/2/2011
Whoa. That was amazing. So realistic...I find SasuSaku (actual, reciprocal, established relationship, amrried with kids SasuSaku) to be far-fetched, with drastic OOCness, and you've accomplished it neatly, and with a depth of character and shading that was terrific.
I'm kind of glad that the M-rated stuff was not present (The kisses were good enough for me!) but I could see where you chopped it out!
I love the point about all the ninja's growing up and changing, their families becoming their priorities...it seemed so real.
I LOVE Shun. Little, adorable (but not sickly-sweet) realistic baby Shun. I love Sasuke's and Sakura's decision that they want more kids (baby-making makes me happy!) I love the prickly and un-friendly nature that Sasuke still has (okay, maybe I don't love it, I want to smack him...a little...but I can see how it fits.) I still feel that he loves her and Shun...
In one sense, it seems that he still needs to grow and accept her love completely (his bristling that she could she his thoughts so easily...) but anyway...GREAT JOB.
(Love adult!Sakura...and homecoming!Sasuke who just wants to make out with his wife...and yet it didn't have a porny feeling to it. It felt so real, and gave us information about the characters.)
| Miko-chan chapter 30 . 1/4/2011
actually my most fave image that came to my mind was this:
She opened one with her teeth, much to Sasuke's unconcealed horror, grabbed a bottle of soda from an unsuspecting passer-by, and poured its content into the sticky rubber sack she managed to shake out with her titanic strength.
i am going to bet my whole salary, that sasuke is imagining another scene in his pervy inner theater. :D i think what saved sakura was they were in public. nyahahaha!
LOL, reading this again soothed me. or made me laugh. it's hilarious to imagine that after all that zombie war circus in the current canon, when that's all over, they will now focus on a more important dilemma: Sasuke's virility. XD
again, thank you for this lovely cracky fic, oneesama. XD
| Ori chapter 29 . 6/15/2010
Oh yes you have updated!
It's so strange to read stuff you write now, I mean after reading your Naruto fic since back in the days in 04. I mean, 04! That's 6 years ago, more than a quarter of my life! The craziest part is that after all these years, I think you are still my favorite fanfic writer ever. I guess that's what drive me to check your page once in a while, and that's what brought me to these new one shots.
Thanks for writing this and please write more in the future.
| Lifestyle chapter 5 . 9/13/2009
Love this chapter! :D
| Raina1 chapter 29 . 5/31/2009
God, I love your work. Your style of writing, dialogue and descriptions are simply beautiful.
| Twinnet chapter 28 . 8/6/2008
| Melitza chapter 25 . 5/18/2008
Loverly! This is like crack for the Sasuke x Sakura fan. I'm a huge fan of your stuff on AFF, and I'm glad to have found this collection as well. I feel like a kid in the candy shop! *frolics off to enjoy the collection more*
| bb chapter 28 . 5/11/2008
Nice chapter! Reminds me of the Silence of the Lambs. Very intense. Seemed to me like a little snippet out of a multi-chaptered fic.
Keep up the great work!
| Prlanta chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
Would laughing like a maniac while reading this classify me as insane?
All of your oneshots are great, though I usually have to read them twice or thrice to get it*newly learning english,pardon me,
but still, your style is...great, your stories, especially about Naruto, are some of the most enjoyable ones I've ever read...
How the hell people can declare war against SasuSaku while authors like you side by it, I'll never understand.
All I know is that the most talented authors, the ones that write "in character", are SasuSaku writers.
Lady Starburst, you, Alory Shannon, Miko-chan, ObsidianSickle...
Some say that most SasuSaku stories suck, but it isn't true. %50 of SasuSaku' suck, true, but also %60 of NaruSaku, %60 of NaruSasu, % 30 of NejiTen suck too. The ony problem is that there are waay too many fics in that %50 percentage.
The most notable fanfics are from SasuSaku really...For me, many of them are pieces of ART.
FFN is quikly turning me into a SasuSaku fangirl...:D
| mademoiselle anna chapter 27 . 3/18/2008
You honestly never dissappoint. You're one of the few writers I actually make the time to read.
| eeeee.eee.eeee chapter 25 . 1/26/2008
Oh, this was truly wonderful! I loved the setting, loved the situation, loved your characterization, loved your writing. It's a love-fest, I tell you! It's always so nice to see my favorite pairing so nicely portrayed. Plus, fluff is always nice )
| Laura-chan chapter 25 . 1/24/2008
AW, I simply ADORE it :D so sweet! Sasuke was very IC and he's too cute for words when he gets irritated huhuhu.
Very nice work. :)
| Raina1 chapter 26 . 1/22/2008
I remember I read this on the adult fan fiction site, unedited. You probably could have posted the original under the M rating - I've found much racier fare than this. However since this is part of a collection rated for K readers, that probably isn't a good idea. Perhaps as an individually rated piece, yes, this collection no.
Anywho. I loved this as usual. One interesting thing to note is this is probably one of the few fics where we have Sakura say no to more sex. XD Finally, a realistic marriage! Liked that touch about some cultures using pink for boys, it's very true. Thought the whole "playing possum on a mednin" by play was cute. :)
| UnluckyPost-ItNotes chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
Ooh. Wonderful one-shots.
Your work is always so impressive. It stuns me that you don't get more reviews for your work.
As for pairings your view and stories on them is always so realistic.
Keep up the good work and update soon!
| Miko-chan chapter 25 . 1/5/2008
You know that I've always sing high praises for you since the first day we had a conversation. XD
NYAH. ATE MEL.
Honestly, these two, they always makes me cry. (I tried with Megumi x Chiaki, but sometimes they just crack me up. I need the subtitles for the special XD) And the way you weaved your words can never compare to anyone.
I'll be waiting for the choreographed SASUSAKU SMUT. And Smut for Nodame to. (Am I hopong for too much?)