Reviews for Oy, Dormitory!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/6
Good writing! Main problem with it is that the characters don't act their age (17) and act more like 12-15 year olds.
Fred's fanatic chapter 1 . 4/16
Well now he knows where his shirts are lily loves them
So much she wears them to bed as they smell of
James whom will buy some more so he can ogle lily
In his clothes and have some great dreams ,so yes I'm
Hoping like mad for a very long sequel to this brilliant
High class piece of great fan fiction that had me laughing
So utterly non stop .its sensational to see James with his endearing goofy grin all over his face he's sweet as
Apple it could somehow be very interesting
If in the imaginative sequel he gets uncertain if lily
Attempts to deny her feelings by dating say Gideon
Prewett a red haired green eyed wizard whom has a
Twin brother yet although he plays quod ditch there's
A history between him and James not like snakes
Plus he's related to Molly weasleyuet he's in on it
With Lily's help to get James jealous at the start
Two red haired magical people what mayhem could
Occur yes she'll end up with James but he has to work
For his lady a suggestion the rest is up
To my love Elizabeth skinner
Guest chapter 1 . 2/4
Please write another!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2016
Awesome :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2016
U need 2 do a sequel where they get together.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9/2015
I loooved it. the fct that alice had james see lily in his shirt wwas really funny and the idea of missing shirts in general is completly absurd yet funny.
MioneGranger123 chapter 1 . 3/5/2015
Will poor James ever get his shirts back?
long live marshmallows chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
Oooh this is brilliant! I love the ending xD
Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
This story is really amazing! Write a sequel!
Mythgirllily chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
You should put the three shirt stories together, each one a chapter.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
AHH HTHIS WAS SO GREATP LEASE WRITE A SEQUEL YOU FABULOUS WRITER YOU
17 Hope chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
This is brilliant! Hilariously love it!
Winter wolf chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
Haha soooo cute!
sristars chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
HAHAHAHAHAHA
I'M PRETTY MUCH DYING OF LAUGHTER. DON'T DO THIS TO ME, CALLISTO
xD xD
Sooo, James found out! Whoo :DD I can't WAIT to read the next one, but I'll review this first. :)
"Groovy." LOLOL, JAMES POTTER. xD xD
They're in luurrveee already, Lileh-chan and Jamesh-kun. :DDD

Sri
Pokegirl666 chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
Cool!
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