Reviews for The Story After the Book
LilyGold23 chapter 7 . 3/12
Please write some more. I really like your story.
Rie fan chapter 7 . 12/13/2011
Dude. Update. Now.

It's been like 4 years since you last updated, update please this story is awsome.
SunsetOfForever22 chapter 4 . 6/9/2009
TORI! _ Idk if you even remember this story / I love it though! You have talent babe P I'm not kidding either. This is good, it has everything. You, if you like it, should start writing again. Later 3
the one who breathes nitrogen chapter 7 . 3/16/2009
Cole is a very abrupt person... and all the quotes are perfect! 8D! Please update again soon!
the one who breathes nitrogen chapter 6 . 3/16/2009
Oh, yay! Quoty stuff! funness!

But one more thingy: Kit went back to get her Jewelry? ANd she and Nat are just... kinda... OC, y'know? I know it's hard to completely embody anyone, but...
the one who breathes nitrogen chapter 5 . 3/16/2009
Missy?

Anyway... Pirates! funness...
the one who breathes nitrogen chapter 4 . 3/16/2009
Pirates... But the paragraphy stuffy! ... Wait... I'm reviewing all in one day... I apologize... heehee
the one who breathes nitrogen chapter 3 . 3/16/2009
8D! Yay! just... do you use word? that helps ALOT! But it is a good story. 8)
the one who breathes nitrogen chapter 2 . 3/16/2009
... Uh, I guess I'm being more critical than nice... so I apologize in advance...

Paragraphs! And Aren't Kit and Nat a little more at each others throats? Just... FYI... NO OFFENSE!
the one who breathes nitrogen chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
Uh, It was lovely. But the whole quote thingy made it hard to read... Start a new paragraph every time a new person talks? Please? It's really hard to read if you don't!
bellabff chapter 7 . 11/11/2007
omg! So exciting! Please update soon!
Nicegal2876 chapter 7 . 11/10/2007
If you used Microsoft Word, it would help you a great deal with your spelling.
SunsetOfForever22 chapter 7 . 11/3/2007
Hey. _ Nice chapter Tori. I'm glad your spacing has been fixed. I can tell who is talking now and what not. Not that I didn't before, it was just kind of like I had to piece it together and now I don't. You take your reviews to heart P. I read someone elses and they had mentioned the spacing and spelling and then I saw your corrections in this. Can't wait for the next one! You make such short chapters and every time you leave us hanging. It's like a really good half-hour sitcom television show that, every single night, leaves us with a cliffy. How about, next time, you make it a really good HOUR-long drama. ] lata.
ff9moonie chapter 7 . 10/31/2007
NO!

:(
Venus chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
these stories are great!
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