Reviews for Victory
Dragon of tassir chapter 5 . 8/22/2013
Good battle
lordcaelus chapter 5 . 8/22/2013
It could be better u know. Lovely premise from the beginning
Dragon of tassir chapter 4 . 8/22/2013
Well then now ten thousand. Man, u like big battles apparently
lordcaelus chapter 4 . 8/22/2013
Love the little mystery craft in the middle of the madness
Dragon of tassir chapter 3 . 8/22/2013
One remark it is O'Neill not with one l
lordcaelus chapter 3 . 8/22/2013
Good chapter and in your own way. But as u recall the ORI seldom need a big fleet but I guess for the purpose of the story it works
Dragon of tassir chapter 2 . 8/22/2013
Leaving Atlantis defenceless bad idea
lordcaelus chapter 2 . 8/22/2013
Things are bad indeed
lordcaelus chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
There are some mistakes - odyssey, and General Landry other than that it is ok
Dragon of tassir chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Interesting start
Light Lord Cybergate chapter 5 . 2/22/2013
Hmm...are they the original ancients?
Oh well..who cares...they saved us ..that's all all that really counts.
Andriabow chapter 5 . 8/24/2010
I just discovered this story and how absolutely fasinating it was. Lots of excitement. Will there ever be a sequel because I'd love to know who this new player is. you did a superb job with the story. Thanks for sharing.
Letsgocubs27 chapter 5 . 3/19/2006
ok...exactly what the hell is going on
debarie chapter 5 . 3/6/2006
I really loved the way Fulgar manipulated Saran. You did a great job with their dialogue. I'm curious to know what happens to Saran now that he is captured. So I'm looking forward to "Secrets of the Past". Well done!
debarie chapter 4 . 3/1/2006
This is a great chapter! I love the sarcasm - you caught beautifully! You're doing a great job with the story - I look forward to the next chapter!
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