Reviews for Victory
Schatze8210 chapter 5 . 9/20
God, gripping story but how can you call it complete!? Who is Lord Fulgar and what is his story?
Dragon of tassir chapter 5 . 8/22/2013
Good battle
lordcaelus chapter 5 . 8/22/2013
It could be better u know. Lovely premise from the beginning
Dragon of tassir chapter 4 . 8/22/2013
Well then now ten thousand. Man, u like big battles apparently
lordcaelus chapter 4 . 8/22/2013
Love the little mystery craft in the middle of the madness
Dragon of tassir chapter 3 . 8/22/2013
One remark it is O'Neill not with one l
lordcaelus chapter 3 . 8/22/2013
Good chapter and in your own way. But as u recall the ORI seldom need a big fleet but I guess for the purpose of the story it works
Dragon of tassir chapter 2 . 8/22/2013
Leaving Atlantis defenceless bad idea
lordcaelus chapter 2 . 8/22/2013
Things are bad indeed
lordcaelus chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
There are some mistakes - odyssey, and General Landry other than that it is ok
Dragon of tassir chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Interesting start
Light Lord Cybergate chapter 5 . 2/22/2013
Hmm...are they the original ancients?
Oh well..who cares...they saved us ..that's all all that really counts.
Andriabow chapter 5 . 8/24/2010
I just discovered this story and how absolutely fasinating it was. Lots of excitement. Will there ever be a sequel because I'd love to know who this new player is. you did a superb job with the story. Thanks for sharing.
Letsgocubs27 chapter 5 . 3/19/2006
ok...exactly what the hell is going on
debarie chapter 5 . 3/6/2006
I really loved the way Fulgar manipulated Saran. You did a great job with their dialogue. I'm curious to know what happens to Saran now that he is captured. So I'm looking forward to "Secrets of the Past". Well done!
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