|Reviews for Victory|
| Dragon of tassir chapter 5 . 8/22/2013
| lordcaelus chapter 5 . 8/22/2013
It could be better u know. Lovely premise from the beginning
| Dragon of tassir chapter 4 . 8/22/2013
Well then now ten thousand. Man, u like big battles apparently
| lordcaelus chapter 4 . 8/22/2013
Love the little mystery craft in the middle of the madness
| Dragon of tassir chapter 3 . 8/22/2013
One remark it is O'Neill not with one l
| lordcaelus chapter 3 . 8/22/2013
Good chapter and in your own way. But as u recall the ORI seldom need a big fleet but I guess for the purpose of the story it works
| Dragon of tassir chapter 2 . 8/22/2013
Leaving Atlantis defenceless bad idea
| lordcaelus chapter 2 . 8/22/2013
Things are bad indeed
| lordcaelus chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
There are some mistakes - odyssey, and General Landry other than that it is ok
| Dragon of tassir chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
| Light Lord Cybergate chapter 5 . 2/22/2013
Hmm...are they the original ancients?
Oh well..who cares...they saved us ..that's all all that really counts.
| Andriabow chapter 5 . 8/24/2010
I just discovered this story and how absolutely fasinating it was. Lots of excitement. Will there ever be a sequel because I'd love to know who this new player is. you did a superb job with the story. Thanks for sharing.
| Letsgocubs27 chapter 5 . 3/19/2006
ok...exactly what the hell is going on
| debarie chapter 5 . 3/6/2006
I really loved the way Fulgar manipulated Saran. You did a great job with their dialogue. I'm curious to know what happens to Saran now that he is captured. So I'm looking forward to "Secrets of the Past". Well done!
| debarie chapter 4 . 3/1/2006
This is a great chapter! I love the sarcasm - you caught beautifully! You're doing a great job with the story - I look forward to the next chapter!