Reviews for The Dark Light
i will read chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
nnnnnnnnnneeeeeeeeeeexxxxxxx xxxxxxttttttttttt at least make a note so we know your working on it
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
is this dead?
Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
story orphened?
krourou2 chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
... Aw, dammit! You've given up on this, haven't you?

Damn. And here, I'd finally found a good fanfic out of a bunch of ones that REALLY don't even need to be checked for grammar and spelling issues; you can find 'em in the summary!

If you ever consider picking this back up, I'd be more than willing to read another chapter. If not, I guess I'll just find something else. *shrugs* Oh well, not much you can do about it, huh?
LOZnJAKlover chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
ooohhhhh!

please continue!

however, i see that u have not on here for like ever, but oh welll..

if u can continue...please do...this story seems very interesting..

what will become of Jak since he fell into the pool of Dark Eco?

(_)
Starscream'sAngel chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
this is cool. I'm glad you can post it.
Raisin' Flames chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
Very interesting. Has a great basis to it. Me likes it lots! :D

But I doubt you're going to update, as it has been three years. :/

But this one chapter was great anyhow. Very nice job. :)
AgentMaryland93 chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Please continue! I want to know what became of Jak!
Stiehl chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Hmm. Doesn't seem like there's going to be a later, given how long it's been since you've updated this... eh, whatever. Maybe you'll get around to it eventually. Good plot idea though.
Tizami-Ki chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
T.T when will you update? I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and beyond. Understandable if your busy though. lol
AngelSilentWind chapter 1 . 2/1/2007
Well, this is certainly interesting. Please continue.
darkshinraknight chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
what happened to jak. like can control Dark Eco pleacs make another chapter
DEACTIVATED09082009 chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
AW! I wanted to read more! Please write more! It's really good so far!
galerian57 chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
cool story please update
Xazz chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
I was worried about Jak talking, but then at the end. Now I don't want not want to read this.

This is really good. Very intense, Rushed it a bit but overall it was good.

Later Days

Xazz
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