Corrections of Spanish words and phrases:

Quiero saber que esta pensando ella – I want to know what she's thinking.

Loved it! Thank u so much for sharing ur talent!

I am new to twilight and now to fan fiction. So sorry to hear you have had serious problems. Want you to know that I truly appreciate Lion and Lamb and your descriptions of Edwards POV. Please take care...you and yours are in my thoughts and prayers.

Like Midnight Sun I knew this wasn't complete but didn't peek as to where it ended. Thank-you for the meadow scene - beautiful and though I'm sorry your story had to end this was a good place for it. Best in all your future endeavours as you are a fabulous writer.

People usually underestimate the value of fanfiction. Original stories never get over three thousands reviews, but, well... Thank you for having write this.

I love it! So much! I wished I didn't have to end...

I will not like it. I am loving it!

Loved it!

I loved this chapter! You're doing a great job. Keep up the good work! :D

I love this Chapter. The tone totally sounds like Edward. He's over thinking, which is one of his great qualities. I also like how you put in some of Mike's thoughts. It's turning out really great! I have to read more.

I love Edward POVs! I am an ultimate Edward Cullen fan! Thank you for posting this story!

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So far so good, but I think it would be out of character for Carlisle to threaten anyone as it says here at the very beginning.

Aw so bummed this wasn't finished. I really loved reading it and seeing the story unfold through Edwards POV and seeing the interaction between his family that we didn't see with Stephanie Myers' story. Hope that someday you will finish this!

You are sooo lucky! I envy you! I absolutely love Stephenie Meyer's work! I read the Twilight series in a WEEK! A WEEK!