Everyone has a one to love and treasure...

I absolutely love this! Your an amazing writer, one with a great future. Continue and best of luck -Jayfeathergal2020...

It's about time I got around to reading this. I love the interaction between Edward and his family. I think my favorite part thus far is the snowball fight. I also like how Edward thinks of everyone as they are much younger than he and his siblings.

Maybe you don't even read the rewiews anymore (probably it is like that), but I want to write you something anyway: thank you.
Every story, every line, that a writer who's in love with a story write is a gift, especially when the writer in question writes about what you love too.

Sending you an hug from Italy xx (sorry for eventual mistakes)

A 17 yo girl who started to read (and dream) again.

I absolutely loved your writing, it was amazing!

I love the book so far. I you are a very good writer. I like your creativity for the times when you had to infer what Edwards family would say and think. It is amazing so far and i cant wait to continue. 3

Cool story! Please update when you can!

Will you ever return to this project, it's a shame if you don't...

Then take it down so people like me don't start reading it only to find out you quite leaving people disappointed.

Wow ... I hope all is now well with you & your family. You are definitely marked as a favorite, and I'll be ready to read the rest if you're ever ready to write it. Kudos to you for a job very well done. Your words are a true joy to read ... effortless. Thank you for providing such a sweet escape, if only for a little while. :)

Forgive me because I haven't read your reviews, so I may be parroting someone else. I love your story thus far, but the ending to this chapter poses a problem for me. If Edward is reading Esme's & Carlisle's thoughts, he wouldn't hear one of them answer the other because they can't hear each other. He would only hear both of them thinking something to the effect of, "He loves her." This would be different, of course if they whispered to each other while errontly assuming he was out of hearing range. :)

Wow. Just wow. The story was probably the best fanfic I've ever read! I can't believe that you stopped writing it, but at the same tim, I completely understand your reasoning. I'm in the middle of writing abook of my own, too. It's about aleans. Don't judge me if I spelled it wrong, I just can't remember the spelling. It's been really fun writing, but I'd love to know what you've written! Lemme know!
Kat

This story was truely amazing, I hope you and your family are doing well now.

is the best that i have read after stephanies