Reviews for Fowl is Foul
A Cup Of Earl Grey chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
astro3236 chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
very creative POV plus rhyming power. However, please update...PLEASE!
MinervaEvenstar chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
Funny; I could actually see the fairies reciting that! My favourite part was "You beat up the fairies, and ruined their theories." Lol, poor Foaly. To be grammatically correct, though, you should have called it "Fowl is Foul."
Dim Aldebaran chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
Hmm. Not a lot of poems here; kudos for giving it a shot. Ivery liked the POV: it worked nicely with this. Anywho, the rhyming was decent - it wasn't very forced - but the beat fell apart in a few places. It wasn't too conspicuous, but I read poetry aloud so I noticed.