|Reviews for Rebuilding|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/1
Geat story. Is jason shortpack from not myself? Theyre extremely similar... its interesting b/c its a bit of a backstory if jason is shortpack and it would explain why kate hasnt seen him in a while but the professor has.
| 2022 chapter 5 . 10/22/2013
Again excellent character development, and background. I like how you mix both good romance, and the type of real life happenings that are normally less covered, and you manage to, in a few words, build a real and working relationship, rather than a lot of the authors out there who move to quickly, or move slowly without the appropriate depth. I look forward to reading any future works that you have, although I have yet to read all of your current ones.
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/6/2013
You wrote this story 7 years ago so I doubt you'll see this review but I think this story was amazing.
| saint21 chapter 5 . 4/17/2013
I like it. It's very sweet
| crazykrew chapter 5 . 11/6/2012
omg second time around and it just keeps getting better... love it!
| deathgeonous chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
This fic just not get enough respect. Less the 50 reviews? And I don't even want to know how low the hits count is on this thing. Which is really a shame, because this was quite the cute and sweet fic. I liked it. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
| Ikurus chapter 5 . 5/20/2012
Loved it. Since it was shorter than the other stories of yours I have read so far I was worried it would move too fast, seem too unrealistic. But you just made it fit perfectly, building into a really sweet tale at a good pace.
As always, thank you for the great story.
| raf-51 chapter 5 . 11/26/2011
Another great story
| SLJ chapter 5 . 4/15/2011
Neat Awww. _
An architect for mutants? Yet another unique OC. This fic certainly felt like a slice of life. A smile was present all the way through due to the steadiness/calmness of it all. Jean as bisexual? Cutely portrayed. x] Nicely written.
| HiddenBetweenTheLines chapter 5 . 4/6/2011
I really like this story. Its so well thought out, and your OC is really believable.
| elfspirit7 chapter 5 . 2/13/2011
AWESOME! Thanks for the great read, can't wait to read your future fanfics XD!
| deathgeonous chapter 5 . 11/4/2010
You know, this was a very sweet story. I greatly enjoied it. Although I thought I reveiwed this one earlier... but ... oh well. Thanks for writing this, and good bye for now.
| Rickmer chapter 5 . 10/26/2010
Very nice story.
Thanks for sharing.
| emily chapter 5 . 8/20/2010
loved this fic :)
| WolfbrotherTitan chapter 5 . 7/18/2010
If you ever decide to do a sequel to this story I'd say make Kim a mutant with some power that isn't obvious. Given that you set her up with Jean, who has come back from the dead numerous times and whose lifesan could well be FAR longer than normal (she might be immortal), I'd say making Kim immortal would work. It's a power she could freak out about and one that wouldn't have impacted her life in a way that she would have noticed. Another thing a sequel could feature would be the whole attemping to harm Jean by harming Kim and, as long as you didn't make it a tradegy, that could be interesting.
Anyway, I just wantedto thak you for the story.