Reviews for Close Call
Souchu chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
Wow, just wow. I know you wrote this a while ago, but I just happened upon it and am SO glad that I did. This is very very well written; I just adore the way you write Harvey.

You can be sure that I'll start reading your other fics too!
Fyrefly chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
Having just read both of your other Mack-fics, I have to say I would be perfectly content to read whatever one-shots you come up with in lieu of a real completion to the other novel... :) Of course if the muses won't let you, I guess there's nothing I can say that will make a difference. You really are a talented writer, though, and I am impressed with all fo your pieces.
RisqueSno chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
This was really well-written, and I seriously enjoyed it. Mack is becoming an even more well-rounded (I've used that word before, but it's true) character as you continue, which is something you don't usually see regarding OCs.

You're probably trying exceedingly hard not to make her a Sue, but I wouldn't worry too much about it after this...just don't give her magical powers or a cape. Also, she's not exceedingly confident or in control which further helps your cause.

It was really nice to see Harvey at the forefront for once. I can't wait to see the continuing adventures of "Gangster Psycho UST"!

Gotta get back to writing more Evil Clown Porn. This fanfiction writing stuff is addictive. Getting reviews is like a high...how do guys deal with it!
whodo chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
its an excellent spinoff
lucinda chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
this was great
Phoebe Holly chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
This was very good. I absolutely loved it.