| Reviews for A Wistful Leaving |
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   rssantos72 chapter 5 . 12/30/2021 More pleaseeeee |
| GreenEyedDayDreamer chapter 5 . 6/15/2006 really good. Truly good. I love it. Update please. _ |
| sportsnightnut chapter 5 . 4/15/2006 It wasn't much, but it was certainly lovely. :) I nearly forgot how much I adore this story...keep going! Great job, and I can't wait for more :) |
| mugglemin chapter 5 . 4/12/2006 Another classy chapter. I love the pacing and the relationship in this story. Everything about it is effective. Your similies, descriptions and general language are excellent, although there are still a few slips here and there which betray you as a non-native speaker. I always know exactly what you mean, though. The ending was very beautiful. I am very much enjoying this! |
| Saint Potter chapter 5 . 4/12/2006 To my liking? Absolutely! The way you write about their relationship is wonderful, Minerva hopeless and Albus giving strenght. It is what he always does, isn't it? But he does it in a very special way as she is a very special person. I wonder, do you intend to deepen their relationship? I do think that they feel something for each other, but, especially Albus can not act the way he would like to, right? Anyway, I love the story and am anxiously awaiting the next chapter! |
| cyber cat chapter 5 . 4/11/2006 i loved this chapter, are we going to see any students in this story is it going to be strictly minerva and albus? i would love to see harry in one of thses chapters, and see what they think of him and how they react around him. |
| Xuimare chapter 4 . 4/9/2006 I love the end! _ This is a cool fic. You really need to update more often, dear.. *Sigh* T_T |
| Portkeys Miss-Mione chapter 4 . 4/4/2006 My face is sporting one hell of a smile now you know... I absolutely adored this chapter. Min's confusion was so cute and the his shoe in the middle of the room... great! I'm already looking forward to reading more. Are you really going to bring in Horace? I never really liked him, but it could be funny in this story. Keep it up! Sara. |
| FourthKnock chapter 4 . 4/3/2006 Another great chapter, are you planning on making Albus and Minerva a couple? |
| FourthKnock chapter 3 . 3/12/2006 Beautiful new chapter, as usual. Can't wait to see what will happen in the fourth chapter. How many chapters will there be? Love and succes Sarah xx |
| JoolsFan chapter 3 . 3/8/2006 Very nice! You absolutely catch the bittersweet atmosphere: the worry Minerva has for Albus (and in fact for the whole world around her), the way she feels she has to stay strong, but also the intimacy of her daring to venture into the most private of his chambers and feeling relaxed enough to fall asleep there. The relationship between these two is obviously special and I love them, and love how you've painted them. (And how sweet of Albus to put her to bed, he's such a gentleman, and a gentle man, too.) More! ;-) |
| Xuimare chapter 3 . 3/7/2006 Aw... I wonder what she'll think when she wakes up.. _ |
| GraciesMom chapter 3 . 3/7/2006 I love your story, but it is so sad, knowing where it will go, if you decide to follow JK Rowlings' version and Albus "dies" (yes, I still have hope that he is really still alive). Very well written, and I look forward to more soon! :) |
| mugglemin chapter 3 . 3/6/2006 I am really enjoying this. You seem to have put a lot of effort into it, and it pays off well. I like the little subtleties such as Albus laughing at having to say his own name to get home. Strange how tiny points like that can have such an impact. I also like the relationship as you portray it between them. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
| gahhMinerva chapter 3 . 3/6/2006 Aww, I thought that was sweet. I love scenes where Albus stumbles upon a sleeping Minerva. Lovely! I look forward to more. :) |