|Reviews for Spirit|
| seemeno chapter 4 . 6/19/2006
This is definatly a twist.
Can't wait for the next chapter
| dragonlady222 chapter 4 . 6/19/2006
Poor joey, hell poor Yugi. I suspected it but I was hoping he was okay in spite of it. This is really good. Update soon, please.
| Doll Face Sally chapter 3 . 6/1/2006
Awesome. I like zat he went back for ze Yami, or in zis case, ze spirit. Can't wait for ze next chapt.
| Bump chapter 3 . 5/31/2006
Cool! I really hope you update this! Its one of the best Yugioh fics I've read! Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Kitty Nekkyo chapter 3 . 4/23/2006
O.O...OMG...OMG no wut happened to yugi. I can't believe you just ended it that was a horrible cliff hanger you made. It was pure evil i want to know what happens so please update. please pretty please with sugar on top...and anything else you want just please update again.
| Coolgirlmich chapter 3 . 4/17/2006
Very interesting story. I wonder where it's going to go from this point on. Keep up the good work!
| Chatwyn chapter 3 . 3/17/2006
You're one damn good author. Dream sequence seemed almost real, and I'm wondering if you wourself had that dream before. The next two chapters were great too. The red-eyes that smelt of alcohol: god, that foreboding feeling, the destruction of mystical elf: totally made me feel so bad, and Yugi coming back for Yami even though he could've stayed safe: Abso-fuckin-lutely PRICELESS, you hear?
Your fic has heaps and heaps and heaps of potential, and it's just fantastic. You write Yugi really, really well - he's *human*, I suppose is the best word I can come up for it. Not a sterotype. And I really can't wait to see what will happen next. Post up another chapter sometime soon, k? Cliffhanger's evil.
| Yami-Yugi3 chapter 3 . 3/12/2006
Oh man... More please!
| kandra chapter 3 . 3/12/2006
Interesting... I can't wait to see how this situation develops. And how Yugi is goig to react to being in coma at best, dead at worst.
| DaakuKitsune chapter 3 . 3/12/2006
Wow... o.o This is REALLY good! *squeaks* But evil cliffhanger! .
| kingleby chapter 3 . 3/12/2006
whoa! this story is so awesome and intense! i love it! _
| dragonlady222 chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
Poor Yami he's not himself. Good story.
| dragonlady222 chapter 3 . 3/12/2006
This is a really good story. Yugi saved Joey and went back for the puzzle, just like he wouldn't leave it before. I am so glad I found it.
| TriplePivotTurn chapter 3 . 3/12/2006
This, is mighty cool. I just received an alert for it being added to Pharaoh's Rule C2, and I'm glad I did, this is proving to be a very interesting story *nods wisely*
So that's how he lost his shoe eh? And his sanity, looks like he left that at the door too. But then again who wouldn't die to Save Yami anyway? I hope you update very soon because this story is really turning out great, with all the linky links and things. I'm still interested about why he couldn't sense Yami or anything when he woke up in that place, or why he's there really, all I can think of is that he's got a new addition to his soul room, it now come complete with a Coma.
| go-yaffa chapter 3 . 3/11/2006
YAY ANOTHER GREAT STORY HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEH