Reviews for Spirit
ninjafairygirl chapter 7 . 3/10/2012

who knew you were such a good writer? thanks for giving me an actually enjoyable fanfiction for once. it's so easy to fall into the rut of predictability, and you only so often find genuinely good stories. can't wait to see the next chapter!
LizzyLizzyInATizzy chapter 7 . 3/10/2012
Look you. I know you're busy being famous and trying to regain your Youtube account and all that, but this story made me cry. Seriously. I want you to finish this. And when it is finished, you are to PM me that it is finished. Or so help me I will sneak into your room and shake a cat over your head whilst chanting Egyptian curses. Geddit? Goddit? Good.

By the way, I think this is wonderfully written. I like how it was Tea that ended up remembering the Pharaoh. It was very sweet.

XOXO Elizabeth
Artemis Nightray chapter 7 . 2/18/2012
This is just AMAZING! you're writing is flawless and I'm baffled by your ability to really understand the characters. It's true it's sad yugi had to die to make this epic tale however I'm not too upset if this is the result.
Malrora chapter 7 . 2/15/2012
Okay, wow. First of all, I haven't read Yugioh fanfiction in ages, I just stumbled across this by chance, so imagine my surprise when I found myself hooked from the first chapter alone. Second, it's beautifully written. Of course there's an error here and there and the earlier chapters were a little confusing because the sections weren't properly separated, but all the same, this is a really stunning piece of fiction. I just love all the detail you've put into describing the spirit world and the characterization is spot on.

To be honest, I was never really a fan of Yami, but I love him so much here, and I love how close he is to Yugi. Oh gosh, and that dream sequence with Serenity had me on the edge of my seat, I didn't know I was holding my breath until Joey woke up.

Seeing as how the last chapter is from '06, I doubt this is going to be updated any time soon, but I will still subscribe in blind hope that someday it will be.
Queen of Light 17 chapter 7 . 12/19/2011
Awww. All the characters remembering Yugi and then Tea's remebrance of Yami allowing him to be able to pass into the portal as well. Really moved me. This chapter really tugs on the heartstrings. It had me tearing up and smiling in so many places. Its so sweet and sad at the same time. I love the friendship between Yugi and Yami and the fact that they will still be able to support one another no matter what comes their way. You are a wonderful writer and I hope one day to read more of this story.
Mitsuki Horenake chapter 7 . 10/25/2011
aasdgvaenrogtiasnehjselrkt Ah, Tea...ah, angsting world...




OK, just for my inner writer's sake, I'm just going to say something quick. You keep writing "spirit" but I caught the words "the Pharoah" once in there, toward the end. In the previous chapters, I would also suggest page breakers. It doesn't even have to be the one FF gives you. A simple will do.


Mitsuki Horenake chapter 6 . 10/25/2011
...I'm drowning. I'm drowning in a river of pain right now. Thanks a lot. I don't usually read angst fics and I made this an exception.

God, I hate these tears. I have to watch something funny after this...

*looks at YouTube account*
Mitsuki Horenake chapter 5 . 10/25/2011
Woooow, Yugi. You can save yourself from the reaches of the Shadow Realm, crazied Duelists, and the pits of hell, and yet a simple FIRE offs you, leaving you with the memory of a girl whose memory is associated with huffing markers.


That sounded a lot sadder than I thought.
Mitsuki Horenake chapter 4 . 10/25/2011

No face and no hair...

That is a creepy image.

And I mean CREEPY.


But at least I was right at the fact that the fire killed Yugi. Not happy, persay, but...well, yeah.
Mitsuki Horenake chapter 3 . 10/25/2011

Here I thought I was going to blame Joey for what happened...but...DUUUUDE!
Mitsuki Horenake chapter 2 . 10/25/2011, Joey. You're such a BITCH. Must be a Brooklyn thing -_-

(I'm spamming you for a few minutes while I review the majority of your chapters.)
liondancer17 chapter 7 . 10/19/2011
I loved this story so much! I doubt you'll continue, but it would make me so happy!
Splee97 chapter 7 . 10/9/2011
LITTLE KURIBOH YOU GET YOUR ASS ONLINE AND UPDATE THIS RIGHT NOW. OR I SWEAR ON MY ANKH NECKLACE I WILL GET MY INFLATABLE ALIEN AND MY BAND OF FANGIRLS TRAINED AS NINJA'S, STRING YOU UP BY YOUR TOE NAILS AND BEAT YOU TO AN INCH OF DEATH. YOU HEAR ME? INCH OF DEATH! Anyway, now that insane fangirl part is over... Wonderful story :) I was literally in tears and I successfully scared the shit out of my friend who was receiving a running commentary on this through FB chat
scaryghost chapter 7 . 9/27/2011
This story was really amazing. Im sad that theres no more of it. You did a fantastic job with what you did write though. Its really touching and just grabs you and drags you into the story
scaryghost chapter 4 . 9/27/2011
This chapter was so emotional. I couldnt help but cry. You wrote this amazingly. It really hits you hard.
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