|Reviews for Spirit|
| Mitsuki Horenake chapter 4 . 10/25/2011
No face and no hair...
That is a creepy image.
And I mean CREEPY.
But at least I was right at the fact that the fire killed Yugi. Not happy, persay, but...well, yeah.
| Mitsuki Horenake chapter 3 . 10/25/2011
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Here I thought I was going to blame Joey for what happened...but...DUUUUDE!
| Mitsuki Horenake chapter 2 . 10/25/2011
...wow, Joey. You're such a BITCH. Must be a Brooklyn thing -_-
(I'm spamming you for a few minutes while I review the majority of your chapters.)
| liondancer17 chapter 7 . 10/19/2011
I loved this story so much! I doubt you'll continue, but it would make me so happy!
| Splee97 chapter 7 . 10/9/2011
LITTLE KURIBOH YOU GET YOUR ASS ONLINE AND UPDATE THIS RIGHT NOW. OR I SWEAR ON MY ANKH NECKLACE I WILL GET MY INFLATABLE ALIEN AND MY BAND OF FANGIRLS TRAINED AS NINJA'S, STRING YOU UP BY YOUR TOE NAILS AND BEAT YOU TO AN INCH OF DEATH. YOU HEAR ME? INCH OF DEATH! Anyway, now that insane fangirl part is over... Wonderful story :) I was literally in tears and I successfully scared the shit out of my friend who was receiving a running commentary on this through FB chat
| scaryghost chapter 7 . 9/27/2011
This story was really amazing. Im sad that theres no more of it. You did a fantastic job with what you did write though. Its really touching and just grabs you and drags you into the story
| scaryghost chapter 4 . 9/27/2011
This chapter was so emotional. I couldnt help but cry. You wrote this amazingly. It really hits you hard.
| Gabriella.Scarlet chapter 7 . 9/17/2011
so cuteeeeee! *-*
| Gabriella.Scarlet chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
| Uchiha Bara chapter 7 . 8/17/2011
awesome chapter :)
| Sammiieeoo chapter 7 . 8/1/2011
This is such a sad story, but it's so sweet at the same time! :')
| APLunch chapter 7 . 7/2/2011
Now I'm not just saying that because you're writing style is beautiful, nor am I just saying that because I'm writing directly to THE Little freakin' Kuriboh (although that word certainly could apply to both situations nicely). I say amazing because this story is absolutely nothing what I would expect from you-in a good way.
I guess I should clarify. I'm the modern Yu-Gi-Oh! fan: I stumbled across your Abridged Series, thought you were hysterical, and only later watched the actual show. All this happened within days of each other, and only a few months ago. And while I have grown to love your videos, I NEVER-in a million years-expected this piece of...of... Well, with writing this good, how else can I describe it but a work of art? I never expected this art to come from what I've [erroneously] associated as LittleKuriboh, who is indeed hilarious, but I thought was always sarcastic and a little on the offhand side.
I've read your Censored Town fic, and THAT has LK all over it. From the abridged references to the sarcasm, it was obvious that you had written that. (Beeteedubbs, my favorite line in that whole story was: "Bakura checked. No pulse." Absolutely brilliant. If someone didn't get the reference, it would have seemed horrifying to know that Marik was dead. But I burst out laughing, even though I WAS admittedly on the brink of tears.) I'll admit that after reading Censored Town, I was quite surprised to find that a guy could write such awesome lemon. I was always (once again, erroneously) under the impression that only girls wrote lemony porn-o goodness. I stand corrected by LittleKuriboh.
Anyway, where was I? Oh right. THIS story... Well, this is COMPLETELY different from everything I thought I knew about you. The story is sincere. There is an incredible take on both dark and humorous situations. And then, there is the beautiful fact that friendship IS one of the binding forces to Yugi, the Pharaoh, and his friends. After reading this, I have come to seriously respect you as not just an awesome video editor and voice actor, but also as a true Yu-Gi-Oh! fan; someone who can embrace the quirky, sometimes naive, plot-line and write something that is truly beautiful and just plain awesome.
I seriously doubt that at this point you will ever complete this story. But if you do, I'm sure there are scores of fans who just die to read it. Truly, you are a legend.
Thank you for being such an awe-inspiring fan. I have watched some videos of you in conventions, and you have wondered why people are still obsessing over you after all this time. I think I may have an answer, at least, a reason why -I- will be obsessing over you for some time: it's because you continually surprise us with hidden talents, random things that you're really good at, and you're able to share it with the world in a way not many people can do.
And that's amazing.
| Ryo Nightray chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
I dunno if you still check your reviews, but lemme tell you that I am stunned by your writing skills. I'm actually speechless! This is one of the best things I've ever read, no joke!
And you say "No, I'm not a good writer"? That was a blatant lie! You write better than I could ever hope to write! :)
| bloodyreds chapter 4 . 5/31/2011
...O-O OMG. I was almost crying. Yugi...he...how... I could feel my heart thump. Despise the evilness, you are a terrific writer. I can imagine your story happening in the real YGO (which I hope will never, not that its bad, but its just too sad, if you get what I mean)
| kanmuri chapter 7 . 5/14/2011
This was absolutely brilliant :) I have no words.