|Reviews for I'm kind of Pregnant|
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/16
damn hermione get pregant harrys baby
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/24
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/24
Ice cream shop is florean fortesque's
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/13
the name of the ice cream parlour is Florean Fortesques ice cream parlour
| Elle G chapter 2 . 10/30/2016
the ice cream place is called Florean Fortescues ice cream parlor.
| TeamRunner chapter 1 . 7/5/2016
I really like this story and can't wait to read the rest!
| Alicerules chapter 12 . 7/25/2015
I enjoyed the plot however it could be better if you worked on it and added more detail as this would also slow it down and make it less confusing.
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/16/2015
Why didn't you read deathley hallows 6 years ago when harry potter was actually a thing!(Just wondering if you'd already read book 7)
| Kendal Jenner chapter 3 . 4/4/2015
Aaaaaaah omfg I soooooo wanted all the juicy dregs about HOW Hermione got. But hey what's life without a little mystery
| mm chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
what the hell?
| frezzo chapter 4 . 12/28/2013
cool so far but im bit confiused slow it down
| XxAnniExX2 chapter 12 . 12/27/2012
It was nice and I enjoyed it. Yes do the prequel.
| LAG1995 chapter 3 . 10/23/2012
Please don't take this as a flame, I am only trying to help.
I am not a grammar nazi as long as its not blatantly obvious mainly because if I can read it easily I don't care. Now this is not the problem you have. Your story is a bit choppy and confusing though it has a good plot. What I would suggest is add in some filler and explanations. Say before Hermione's father explodes write something like this.
They watched uneasily it was like the calm before a storm. His face kept brightening in shades of red, he had a vein throbbing in his forehead pulsing like it would explode. His square jaw ticked as he clenched it tightly, and then he exploded spittle flying every wich way like an ogre.
Just add a few paragraphs like that inbetween some of the dialogue. I hope you take my advice I am only trying to help now I'm going to finish reading. Yay
| Dark Neko 4000 chapter 12 . 9/12/2009
wat going to happen next
| memily chapter 1 . 6/30/2008