|Reviews for On the outside|
| Merianne Maelwys chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Heyitwas actually original! AND enjoyable, YAY!
| AnimeAmber chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
Me like more please :) can't wait!
| funkycool chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
oo wow, powerful beginning, very fast- paced and action built.
i like it a lot.
i also like how well marie knows jason, like when she writes "Jason put down the letter and look behind you."
update soon! xox