Reviews for On the outside
Merianne Maelwys chapter 1 . 6/29/2009

Heyitwas actually original! AND enjoyable, YAY!
AnimeAmber chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
Me like more please :) can't wait!
funkycool chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
oo wow, powerful beginning, very fast- paced and action built.

i like it a lot.

i also like how well marie knows jason, like when she writes "Jason put down the letter and look behind you."

update soon! xox