|Reviews for Confusion|
| Lin chapter 34 . 10/28/2013
You can't just end it there! What happens next? the poor boys it never rains but it pours. how do they progress from here?
| Bleu Tsuki chapter 34 . 10/17/2013
Ahhhh! I absolutely love this story! Sometimes I got confused with the body swap and who was really inside, and I'm still unsure if Hermione and Draco know of the body swap, but I think Lupin and Sirius know. Sirius is really uncontrollable! I can't help but worry he's going to do something stupid!
As for Harry's terrible life- I just love when Snape learns of Harry's suffering! Also, that is one messed up game Voldemort plays...I wonder if Voldemort will recover?
Well, update soon! Your story is very good.
| Lohkai chapter 34 . 9/21/2013
I love it so far, can't wait for you to post more :3
| Actual-Grendel chapter 34 . 3/29/2013
noooooo you have no idea how much I wish this would continue! I just found it on a fic rec page, and it's so wonderful! The length of chapters, the content, and now especially where you left it off... I hope you can brainstorm more chapters in the super near future!
| RoseDreamer87 chapter 34 . 3/9/2013
oh god please tell you are going to finish this. this is good and I cant wait to see how it ends.
| KW2009 chapter 34 . 3/9/2013
Oh it ended. And 4 years since an updated. Such unfinished excellence.
| KW2009 chapter 18 . 3/8/2013
I totally laughed the vaulting and was so excited at the last sentence! Guh!
| KW2009 chapter 7 . 3/6/2013
Whoa intense end
| Larenars chapter 34 . 2/9/2013
Really good story. I enjoyed it, thanks for sharing. Hope life is treating you well.
| sub0chick chapter 34 . 2/4/2013
wow, great story, very complex and twisty and you've done a great job keeping all the threads in line (except for one part early on where mione questioned snape-in-harry about receiving a letter from both snuffles and padfoot and nothing coming of it). and i feel so sorry for the boys, they finally get what they've both been wanting and...they were under the influence and i'm sure can't remember it lol. though one small problem with the timing of things, they've been out of school for less than a week and it's already his birthday which is july 31? other than the couple little things, mainly spelling/word choice issues, it's been a great read and i hope you find motivation to work on it again soon as i'd love to see how this all wraps up :D
| Guest chapter 24 . 2/4/2013
couple little things about chapters 23-24: it's Narcissa (like the flower) not Narissa. And "tomb" is where you bury a body, "tome" is a book
| sub0chick chapter 3 . 2/3/2013
He hadn't lived that down for weeks after. ß Not sure to what this sentence and a half is referring. Whose nights were sleepless? And who hadn't been able to live what down?
need to delete your beta's notes :) though, unless you edited it after their notes, it actually makes perfect sense, ron was jerking off thinking of mione without casting silencing spells and harry and probably the whole dorm heard him
| sub0chick chapter 2 . 2/3/2013
"He's done a lot of wincing, so I changed this one to 'cringe'. at the voice that was now his." as a reader-that's super distracting to come across in the middle of reading, takes you completely out of the story that you've spent all this time building. just change the words as you wish and be done with it, you're the author, you don't have to justify word choice to us and it is typically a good idea to try to vary words regularly so it doesn't read like a skipping record anyway
| Danielle Hyena chapter 3 . 1/16/2013
There's a line in here from your beta...the paragraph about Ron's fantasizing.
Great fix though. I'll be reading the rest of it. :)
| Thirteen Ravens chapter 24 . 1/13/2013
You've typed 'tomb' where it should be 'tome.' and Narissa where it should be Narcissa.