Reviews for Respect
MaxManuka chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
:)
ricco-the-penguin chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
ooh! *g* I lurved this...I totally imagined him doing that!
Angst Equinox chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
Closest thing we have to Bartimaeus fluff. Very good.
Miz Turwaithiel chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
Very nice! It made me feel all fuzzy inside. 3

"shape while truly debating the shape" I would substitute one of these for 'form', and change the first line to first person.

Brilliant one-shot. :D
Bowles chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
I really liked this idea - your grammar was good and you really captured Bartimaeus's character. It was short, yes, but it was perfect as is. Although in the first sentence you used third person when you shouldn't have, I only noticed that on the second time through. Great work.
Killshea Kavani chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
Aw. Cute. :)
Dawes chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
That was short, and very sweet. I love it. Wonderful work.

-maggie