Reviews for Unreadable
Cassiopeia Adeodatus Black chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
I really loved this story. I was laughing so hard at many parts. Great job. :)
Tdvu chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
Very nice story, good job!
Spikesagitta chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
i think i like Vivian, interesting character, and her view on sex? simply amusing i guess hi had to read this old fic, if i wan to read the sequel, so here im. got to say, how the heck did i missed this? im stil waiting for you to updated your other fic!
KnightMare24 chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Is there any chance you'll do another chapter of this? I'd love to see the Xmen have to eat their words.

Princess Alexandria
Alphawolf69 chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
Wow, you totally took me by surprise with this one, I was confused thinking 'Huh, I didn't remember Betsy being such a bitch...' but you pulled it together and it was a thrilling (if angsty in parts) fic. Way cool.
Metroidvania chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
Aw...sweet and touching._ I especially liked the section with Betsy having cried after Vivian left, and when she was lingering outside Vivian's work. One question though: Who is "Another woman, this one who had strange tattoos coming down her cheeks"? I'm sure I know who she is, but for the life of me, I can't think of a name. Nice fic. A good read. Another question though. Where are the rest of PA's valentine challenges? I've read hers and yours, but the yahoo group will not cooperate with my computer. Is there any other site you know of which has the rest of them?

Sweet fic, good work, and can't wait for the next part of P,TOE. Hopefully it's KOTOR II _


Sam chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
An Amazing story. I would love to see more stories about this couple.
Harry2 chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
:-) Very nice Yimmy! A bit different than your Emma/Psyclocke story, but interesting none the less. I will continue to look forward to reading more of your work and reviewing it when I can.