|Reviews for Friendly Strangers|
| MarineDolphin chapter 1 . 12/8/2016
May I offer some advice?
I see what you're going for here, and it's a great idea! One or two tips you might want to consider are:
1-No text talk. It's frankly a bit annoying, since real books/shows don't really do that.
2-When they do the 'secrets' thing, they just blurt stuff out. I would think that they would have some self-controll and practice to never mention the word secret. (Though the awkwardness is somewhat amusing)
3-Keep it going! This could be a great story, with tons of chapters and reads! Stretch out the story a bit, and add a central plot. Just make sure that you don't make each chapter 1-2 paragraphs.
| Full moon wolf chapter 3 . 7/31/2015
Uh, true question. Why on earth is Skulker talking like stinking Tobi from Naruto?
| Totalfangirl01 chapter 4 . 12/21/2014
Okay? I'm gonna say this just once (nahh...): Vlad needs a life...
I mean, a what? 40 year old man (who looks older) trying to defeat 2 superpowered teens (well, 1 teen of 14 years old and 1 kid of 10 years old)? That's just...weird; he seriously needs a life...and a cat (oh wait, he already has 1 XD)
| Michael chapter 4 . 4/18/2014
This was good. I liked it. The one problem is that Danny uses a ghostly wail not a scream. It was short but it was quick and to the point. I give this a 9.8 out of 10. I could see this happening in the show.
| cartoon lover chapter 4 . 9/19/2013
please tell me you are working in another chapter. i really like your story and i think its gona be even more interesting.
| DestinyJoyHope chapter 3 . 9/6/2013
It's a Ghostly Wail, not a ghost scream.
| DestinyJoyHope chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
You spelled Skulker wrong.
| Raven phantom chapter 3 . 3/16/2013
Tip: skulker is how you spell it and ghostly wail not scream otherwise good job
| ChopSuzi chapter 4 . 1/21/2012
Hah! That was pretty good!
| ChopSuzi chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Cool! But you're spelling Skulker wrong... not meaning to be a pain.
Anyways, great idea!
| ugty chapter 3 . 9/18/2010
it's not called the ghost screm thats just stupid it's called the ghostly Wail and it would take down skulker easily want proof just watch danny phantom the ultimate enemey this is not a flame this is just me asking you to change the ghost scream to ghostly wail.
| ultima-owner chapter 4 . 7/30/2010
upgrade is fun
| ultima-owner chapter 3 . 7/30/2010
Ghost freak should do the skin peel back thing
| ultima-owner chapter 2 . 7/30/2010
What chaos all come of this meeting?
| ultima-owner chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
This goods bad