i love this story

Yaay for Hyourinmaru XD

Hahaha, funny and very well written story. Ehm...yeah...what else is there to say other than that this story rocks!

Keep it up )

[Yeah, erm, in advance, just ignore the wacked-out email add...too much sugar, too late at night...]

I like it, I love it, I want you to write another one. And I almost choked on my toast, thus adding a whole new dimension to 'laughing your head off'. )

I love how Hyour- Hyourhbi- ::checks fic:: Hyourinmaru (chyeah!) is such a smart-mouthing, badass and yet, somehow, wise zan- zanba- (ah crap..) Thing Starting With Z/Katana.

And I like the pairing too. ::beams::

~96% Certified Insanity

(How old are they anyway?)

wow, i mean, wow. that's gotta be the best hitsugaya x matsumoto i've read for a while...funny, well structured, good length, not funny-frickin hilarious! great characterization, realistic...loved it!

great work!

GAH. I LOVE IT. HitsuxMatsu is forever my Bleach OTP. Thank you so much, you have seriously just made my day!

Hmm.. interesting.. -winks- You should do another fic that's later. Like maybe... 10.. 20 years into the future? -adjusts halo- Teehee. Anyway, cute fic. I like it!

Loves it! And I like the fact that the swords can talk to their partners like that.

though i was really dubious about the pairing...

BRILLIANTLY WRITTEN!

you made it work. ;D

:D...write more, this was really original i thought.

Love your story -

Was great~

That was really cute and funny. Hitsugaya's confession line, "I think I may be a little bit in love with you" kills! Very adorable! Good job.

There is a significant lack of well written stories here in the Bleach category. You took up the challenge and prevailed. Bravo! Your writing was beautiful, comedic, and thoughtful. I am saddened that it ended as quickly as it did and I think it would be great if you wrote a few more chapters with all the enthusiasm and length you put into this chapter. Great work!

I really like the driving interaction between Hyourinmaru and Toushiro in this story. I think Bleach stresses the importance of a relationship between sword and weilder enough that a work developing that relationship is very insightful.

Good job with holding to character personality too. I think Hitsugaya is well done and I really think Matsumoto is nailed. I loved the line about her not being likely to cry near the beginning. Spot on for Matsumoto and Hitsugaya-about-Matsumoto.

Just to note: if you ever go back to clean this up/edit, the sentence, "Someone's at home to Mr. Crabby today." could use clarification. (near the beginning) I get the gist, but taking out "at" would make it more readable, for example.

lol this story is pretty awesome, but i never really did picture rangiku and hitsugaya, but somehow you make it work quite well so update real soon

Well, I have to admit I rarely read any stories related to Hitsugaya...then again I rarely read any Bleach fanfics but I have to admit I did find this one quite enjoyable. I especially liked the quips and arguments from ice dragon-sama there...Hyourinmaru right? I really need to focus on exactly who all the names belong to.

I liked the entire theory about the Soul Slayers being able to communicate with eachother...quite frankly I found this story just plain interesting in an amusing way. If you have any mroe stuff like that stored away, I highly suggest you go through and post them, you can never get enough amusing fanfics like this one...in fact they seem to be a rarity these days.