I enjoyed how the zanpakutou played a large part inside of Hitsugaya's head. Loved the thorough take on his feelings too. A nice little gem.

Ah excellent work! I'm still laughing :D I especially loved that part :

Hitsugaya rubbed his eyes, but it did nothing to make the throbbing headache go away. "Let me guess. You drove all your former wielders to suicide, didn't you?"

There was a lengthy silence. It went on long enough that Hitsugaya began to worry that he'd seriously offended the dragon. As much as Hyourinmaru might annoy the living daylights out of him, he was truly fond of the dragon, and therefore was more than a little relieved when he heard the cold, crackling sound that was the draconic equivalent of a throat clearing.

Well...just the one...

AHAH, just the one, yeah :D

Hyourinmaru just roxx :D

Thanks a lot for this fun fic!