|Reviews for Pay Back two|
| crimson shadowol chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
that was a pretty good oneshot better than others i read i just wished it was longer and that i knew what Bakura meant when he said "soon one day Mana you'll want me to repay you."
| niwa-chan chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
You know I really like these two together. Cool story!
| Ritsu Kaiori chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
She says she hates him but she really doesn't, hehe will there be a third one someday?
| peaches chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Goodness, I don't even remember how many times I've reread this piece! I absolutely love it! I am terribly into simple one shots such as these that suggest a good amount of fluff. I wish more of these were around! I love your writing style as well.
| FDPV chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
Finally, I see that you added a new chapter to the story. Yay!
| hanyou-samurai chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
well, that was excellent (so was the first one) are you going to continue it? I like this piaring quite a bit _
| The Goddess of the Madhouse chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
uh, repay him? For what?
| Rutoh-Chan chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
I like it, I like it, I love it. Cool story. I fyou do have time, keep going. If you don't, endless endings are cool too. did that make sense? Kisara Bakura thing would be cool. Don't see her come up much.
| Almandine-Azaleea chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
Awe! That was just adorable. I thought about that connection too. _
| Harpygirl91 chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
;_; fine I won't ask you about the kisara/bakura thing. I'll be nice and quiet about that but... I LOVE THESE TWO ONE-SHOTS! -
| Saturn's Spawn chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
sometimes, short is good. I really liked it!
| LittleMana chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
Liked the story, but would Bakura REALLY say "Hello, my dear"? _0 "My dear"? I dunno, it just seems a bit out of character to me...
| Bellebelle3 chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
Wow! This is wonderful! I LOVED the whole mana thing...it made this fic insightful.
| Mishirith chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
that was good i like it. very cute.
| blueangel11isdead chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
aw... this is so cute! I love this! lmao! Both of them are so good! _
Lol, maybe you'll write ANOTHER one shot after this... lmao! hope you doo!