|Reviews for In Time|
| Yun Kei chapter 1 . 11/5/2016
I like your use of Japanese names. Sounds a lot less more fuckboy-ish than the Japanese names lol. Also I'm Asian, so it's reassuring hearing people talk in Oriental languages. Also KOKOSHIPPING FTW
| Arenarceus14 chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Um, using Japanese names alienates English readers. I really don't memorize Japanese names and I think it'd be best if you stuck to English.
People might also think you're a weeaboo if you use Japanese terms in an English fanfiction.
Other than that, interesting little thing.
| OverLordHimeko chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
Dammit. This seems like it needs a sequel 3 -nudge nudge- Dude/Dudet you left me hanging here wanting to know what happens next. Oh well it was an extremely good one-shot.
| YAOI-lovin'-talktomyself-girl chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Please, tell me there'll be more.. This is great! Keep it up!