Reviews for Path of No Regrets: Renewal
Blackstar Angel chapter 5 . 3/23/2006
I love this! Update soon!
Matt chapter 2 . 3/20/2006
Julie, I miss you soo much. Dani said you're probably not coming back, but I think you will.

Great job on the story. You're an awesome writer.

And Julie, I found something that might interest you. :D

AOBA...Hehe. :P
WHOCARES chapter 5 . 3/18/2006
this chapter was pretty good, although i was expecting naruto to at least offer to go eat with sasuke (im hungry) but i suppose there both not ready for that...and i suppose that they will be forced to interact more, seeing as kakashis making them live in the same house...and a quick question, will this be an eventual sasunaru...i hope not since i really like the relationship you have in their one shots...brothers/friends.
Eboni chapter 5 . 3/17/2006
Ok, the site ATE the start of the brilliant review I was leaving for you. It's infamous for eating reviews submitted by me. I think I'm on its crap-list or something...

Lets see if I can recall what I said lol. Hrmm... This story is what I look for when I leaf through Naruto fics. I mean, I read other topics, but the "what if" storylines with Naruto succeeded in his mission to bring Sasuke home after the Valley of the End are my favorite.

I read and see so much Sasuke hate after his whole betrayal of Konoha, and it bothers me that so many don't look at the psychological processes behind it.

Sasuke witnessed mass murder of his entire family again and again per mental attack by an older brother he worshipped, not to mention the mass murder was committed by said brother. His goal in life is to kill his brother... he freely says this with the blackest eyes I've ever seen at 12!

Kakashi deciding to give up missions to concentrate on Sasuke is good. Someone needs to. I love how you went back to that first day Kakashi met them all and had him evaluate Sasuke and his goal statement. I loved Sasuke's sputtering description of the events of his and Naruto's fight and why he felt he did it.

I also love that Sasuke apologized to Chouji the best he can and it seems that the team sent out to retrieve him might be forgiving, though they were nearly killed. It was touching :).

Sasuke curling up in his parent'd bed after being awoken by a cycle of nightmares for the second time that night was precious. Kakashi covering him up and leaving and Sasuke having pleasant dreams afterwards made me smile. But I also understand why he dind't argue when Kakashi said he was moving him out of that house. He really shouldn't stay there, especially not by himself. Too many ghosts.

Sasuke and Naruto living together. Scary. At least they will be getting a new place and not staying in Naruto's apartment lol. I wonder how Naruto will take to Sasuke's nightmares, if he continues to have them while they are staying together. That would be a scene I'd love to see.

Please update soon!

Azamiko chapter 5 . 3/17/2006
The pointing out of the Anbu was funny, and the last scenes were sad...and it didn't seem good work.
Fic Slayr chapter 5 . 3/17/2006
hmm nice fic, allow their friendship 2 grow again...update soon
miako chapter 5 . 3/17/2006
In referance to Sasuke's room, I know nothing, but about Naruto's I can tell you that his bed is up against a wall near a window and you can see, nearby, a table, possibly a fridge, maybe cabinets etc. It is what I believe is called a "bachelor pad". Or maybe I'm wrong about that. All I know is that that description is from the chapter where we first meet the sandnins. Awesomeness from you , and thanks.
NekoAnime chapter 5 . 3/17/2006
I don't know why this particular part stuck out to me but the idea of Sasuke thinking the word stupider made me laugh. It was funny.

The beginning of this chapter was good and it just kept getting better. You could feel the tension while reading the scene between Sasuke and Naruto. Then I felt so incredibly bad for Sasuke when he went to his parents room. I really liked the part where he went to go in, turned around and came back before throwing the door open and going inside.

So I'm guessing they're gonna live together. That oughta be interesting. Where are Jiraiya and Kakashi gonna be? I know Sasuke didn't do anything when he found out he was moving but what I'm waiting for is when they find out they're living with each other. And Tsunade's right. Put them in Naruto's small apartment and they would eventually have to get a new place to live. XD

I think you did a fantastic job on this, you'd never be able to tell you struggled with it if you hadn't mentioned it. I can't wait to go to Naruto's point of view next. Oh, and I'm terrible but what's the 25th shinobi saying. ;
ArminaSkitty chapter 5 . 3/17/2006
... Damn, I just checked your update-date on this fic and it's WAY too early for me to demand an update pronto since you updated today... grr, logic and rationality is so unfair...

ArminaSkitty chapter 4 . 3/17/2006
In regards to your opinion towards reviews; you basically stated my own feelings towards them, so here's my review.

If you do not continue this fic, I'm going to set me evil, Anti-Christ Kitty on you. This is a totally awesome fic, I love how introspective you're making it and how you have Sasuke try and organize his feelings, then totatlly fail at it. Keep up the great work. Now, on to the next chapter! Yeah!

blue-genjutsu chapter 5 . 3/17/2006
Another great chapter! Really love how you write! :)
Youkai kagami chapter 5 . 3/17/2006
I sincerely hope that you DO know what a genius you are. If you didn't, well, then, I am ehre to tell you that you are.

I think I've pretty much said all that can be said about a story in general, but I've barely scratched the surface of your sheer...well, genius.

I've laughed, I've smiled, and I have been prompted to tears more than once in this fanfiction, and I cannot wait until I get to read more of it.
WHOCARES chapter 3 . 3/16/2006
and yea for chouji...who could probably forgive anybody for anything...unless it concerns shika or food
WHOCARES chapter 4 . 3/16/2006
im really likin this fic...since a majority of the other "uchiha come home" fics are like...YAY HES BACK!COMMENCE HAPPINESS!...this actually keeps the somewhat depressing (in a good way) tension that was present in the VOTE fight, and that things wont go back to the way they were least not right away...and the only thing you could do to make me not like this story is to create Super-sasuke or naruto...i HATE super fics, specially with naruto and kyuubi
blue-genjutsu chapter 4 . 3/12/2006
Loved the part with Sasuke acknowledging what the other guys did for him and his conversation with Chouji. I'm glad to see Sasuke showing some remorse over his actions. :)
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