I really like how this is progressing so far. It seems like something big is about to take place from both Naruto and Sasuke. I can't wait!

more please!_

You have done a great job with the characters and the plot and I wish this is how it had really happened. Can't wait to see how it goes with Naruto and Sasuke living together and with Sasuke learning how to use his own strength and power instead of thinking he has to get strong overnight. Keep up the great work with this story!

*stares in awe* wow, you write Kakashi so well too... And having Sasuke and Naruto living in the same house... hilarious: they'll drive each other nuts! ...but then again, it's a brilliant plan.

You write Sasuke really well! His train of thoughts was just awesome.

Awesome! I really wish this had happened TT_TT oh sasuke, why?

You get the character's thoughts really down pat, they're in character and react like they should. I was really happy when Naruto noticed that Sasuke was hurting so much, it was so touching and i felt his fear and shock when he realised this. Please update soon! I cant wait to read more! kyuu kyuu!

I wasn't sure about this story when I read the first chapter, five minutes back, but when I read this one, I just sat quietly for a while and decided that this is definatly one of your best stories in a long time. Please, update soon, and keep the chapters about this long each time. It's so nice being able to read long chapters that suck you in!

Awesome...I'm really not sure what else to say but..don't give up. Please. It really, really is worth it. And um... I think kabuto really did like Naruto and knew that he had a lot of potential. To para phrase something he said during the 2nd phase of the chuunin exam: "If he ever gains control of that huge amount of chakra, he'll become a monster." The cruel comments, I think, were more to make Naruto hate him, but whether this was to make Naruto fight him properly, or just to permanantly cut ties with him, I can't remember. Anyway good luck, and know that your story has at least one fan for being interesting, well written and just that damn good.

Ah... it's always refreshing to see a good story beginning. I really hope you continue this. Poor Sasuke... but I really hope someone will be there for Naruto too...

awesome story! should be interesting to see what changes. Naruto was pretty angsty, but that was pretty much how he was acting in the manga, too, so it works out well. -

Wow...This is the first time that I've been to the Naruto section of and I must say that you've made quite a good first impression! Great job! I love it...there are absolutely no grammar or spelling errors that I can find and it's really good. Please update ASAP!

Very well written! I think Naruto's reactions were fine as well as Sakura's. Keep it up!

update soon!

I love this story! Please udpate soon and is it going to be a Sasu/Naru. That would be so cool (please if not dont't make pairing...)

Oh... and this is really great.

Cool...I'm looking forward to the next chapter...and the rest of it, of course...