Reviews for Stumble
Kitty- chan chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
So everyone has already told you what a brilliant writer you are... But seriously, that was awesome! Drunk!Roger was portrayed perfectly and it made me smile. I almost forgot it was a dark fic for a while. But the ending actually made me cry! ;( Poor Mark...
Yamishi-kun chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
this could not have been more perfectly executed. I love you.
jeanenjolras chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Oh, goodness. I laughed almost all the way through this, and thought "how the hell can this be dark, other than Mark with his hands full of Roger not turning them on," which, of course, sent me into another giggle-fit. It was good, and solemn at the end, and a little scary. I liked it!
ManyHawks chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
That was fucking awesome, you should write more RENT. The beginning made me dizzy, the middle made me laugh, and the end made me sad.
DreamerChick chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
Oh My GOD. Oh. That was...awesome in a disturbing way. I'm Words not form correctly in head. This Good. This Very Good. I mean, I can see Mark wanting to die too. It makes sense in a twisted way. It's so calculated the way he goes about it. a really dark way. And the emotional flow is very organic (god, I'm starting to sound like my high school drama teacher)
storyinmypocket chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Oh my god. Oh my god. Oh my God. Oh my god.

I knew, starting to read, that it was going to be dark, but it was so easy to get sucked in by babbling drunk!Roger, all fuzzyheaded and cute. And them Mark... Oh God. You did dark!Mark so well, I'm in awe. Absolute AWE at how brilliantly IC they are.

And looking at them both, I don't know who to feel sorrier for.
FoodOfLove chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
ZOMG. so poetic. so dark. omg at mark. a bit ooc, but i love it when he shows off a dark side. a dark mark is sexy. holy shit this is fucking amazing like wtfyeahbaby! i must be crazy. getting drunk over your story. this one was good. really good. and roger's hot.
Romyjaden chapter 1 . 7/6/2006

Oh my God.

That was... I don't even know how to explain that.

That was so... so...

Just know that you're incredible because I can't find the right words for this story, not at all.

punchbayside37 chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
It started of cute, then it got hot, the it got creepy. poor mark.
forgetregret13 chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
This story is beautiful. The way you wrote when Roger was drunk was just amazing. This story is so sad. It almost made me cry, loser that i am.
Crimson Blood Dressed chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
Wowza. That is sad and kind of scary. Poor Mark.

I like it though. Good work.
Starlight's Delight chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
Since I read your summary, I knew what was coming, and it's so weird, because I forgot all about the whole AIDS thing, and just the fact that Mark was taking advantage of Roger freaked me out. And then when I remembered, it was like a sucker punch. And I LOVE how Roger reacts, how he can't believe his friend Mark feels that way. Whoa. The drunk talk was very awesome and funny to. Kind of leads you into a false sense of security before you're hit with the heavy stuff. Wonderful, just like your other fic. Another favorite.
Me chapter 1 . 2/27/2006

Took my breathe away.
little.prying.Pandora chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
Oh. So good. Hilarious in the beginning, and then so sad at the end! Very good.
citruspeach chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
Holy fuck. Wow. That was amazing, and that amazing would be in italics if I could do that in reviews. Your drunktalk was wonderful, and the end was so wonderfully frightening... because somehow, it came off as something that would happen. This's being favorited, yes, most definitely.
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