|Reviews for Defender's realm|
| psyco bitch from hell chapter 3 . 5/1/2006
i liked the story so far it was all good
| Omnicat chapter 3 . 4/5/2006
*gasp!* Kill the plot bunny? ! ? Have you gone mad, Silver! ? It made you write this wonderful chapter and you want to kill it off just because it's been causing you some agony?
Hm, you told me to tell you if I saw any errors... well, sorry to say this, but I see quite a few. Past and present tense aren't your strongpoints, are they?
But apart from that, I still want to see more of your writing, asap! Pretty please?
| IronicSymphony chapter 3 . 4/5/2006
Yay! Ringo's back! Yay! Bringing back the originals is fantastic, and I loved Star's reaction! Teehee, the Radam Queen having tea...
Because you asked for it, here it is: Be mindful of capital letters at the beginning of sentences. In most parts, you did this, however there were a few missed. It's all part of learning _
| Omnicat chapter 2 . 4/3/2006
It's an interesting story, though I don't know half the characters. _;
Um, Silver, would you like me to beta for you? No offence, but you could use it.
| IronicSymphony chapter 2 . 4/3/2006
FANTASTIC CHAPTER! Hotaru's growing more and more interesting by the minute and the way you brought Dead End into the team was well done.
I want to congratulate you also; that you used "you're" instead of "your". Be proud of yourself because that's a common mistake in the realm of fanfiction. *pats on the back*
Congratulations, thanks for the chapter and please hurry with the next one!
| IronicSymphony chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
Welcome, Silver Winged Dragon _ Wow, it's great to see another fic and a new author!
Being a Blade/Star fanatic, any story that has them married with kids is going to be a favourite of mine! Keeping in mind that English is your second language, you have done well. I couldn't imagine how terrible my grammar/spelling/etc would be if I wrote in another language, so well done! As you requested, below is a little tip:
EG (David didn’t **knew** what happened)
EG (David didn't **know** what happened) correct
You've done a great job with this fic, please don't get too disheartened by grammar...fans are patient! I can't wait to find out more about Hotaru...offspring of my favourite couple!