Reviews for Visitation Rights
Camy99 chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
That was the most beautiful piece of writing I have ever read!

This part:

I had a secret with myself that he wasn’t ever going to know, not even in this romantic moment in the moonlight. He’d proposed to me the same way that another boy had, years before Phil, my new husband, came along…

Is kinda confusing me though...
princetongirl chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
loved it update soon
dancercat1212 chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
THIS IS MY FAVORITE STORY ON EARTH!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE

IT!YAY

BRAVO!

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(")_(")im very happy after reading that story!
Ravivluver1993 chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
This was an awesome story! I don't really get the end, though. She did marry Phil, right?
JanineTooDamnLazyToLogIn chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
Wo0Ts! you made it work! you made it all work!

Ah! you did it!

LoL.

And it's so god!

I Love it! yay!

woohoo!

okay. maybe i should stop now.

*quietly walks out of the room*

*peeks back in*

i got the pie, btw. lmao.
ennaxxor chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
Nice story! At first I was assuming that it was AU, with the Back to the Future Episode never happening, but then there was the explanation that cleared up all questions. I like how that was done, allowing them to stay longer, yet still staying true to the show (although this way Keely doesn't remember any of it, a shame, and they never ended up getting together). I also liked how in the epilogue it wasn't quite clear who she was marrying. I first assumed Phil, then there was the mention of the proposal and I was wondering if there was some weird time thing again so Phil never came back to visit and she ended up marrying the other guy anyway.
Sultan Peppershaker chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
Well that's just freakin amazing.

I had a review all set up, I press send, and it turns out the server is overloaded. So the review didn't go through. And I don't want to write the whole thing again...

Um... well, I always thought Candida's last name was "Grople", but apparently I'm an idiot, so... yeah.

Anyway, I could see the whole thing playing out in my head... so that's good. Felt like it was actually real. I found myself thinking that Shar wouldn't take the news as well as he did, so that's a good sign for you.

Anyway, that's basically the abbreviated review...

I thought it was great. Just great.
IWishIWasAMermaid chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
omigosh, this fanfic rocks! I love it!
element90 chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
This is fantastic. There are many things I enjoyed, but I won't go crazy with the details. I can't possibly comment on every little thing. Well, I can, but it could get rather scary if I did. So I'm just going to say that I love the entire thing. Excellent job.
crystal.elements chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
WOW! LONG! 0_0 but i loved it. it was a brilliant...long...one shot. lol. you did a great job. cant wait for more of your stories...in fact, i dont believe ive read your other stories yet. ill go do that now. _
n1c0le chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
Great story! So sweet :-)
Shanaenae50591 chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
Aww...that was so AWESOME! The ending confused me. And I still don't get it...lol. Other than that, It was my favorite story from you. I read ur other stories and they were AWESOME but this one can't even top those! Great Job!
cobraj899 chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
Awesome! I loved it, you deserve an Encore.
Aye sea turtles chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
Wow, just wow. That was so awesome! I totally missed your stories. Glad you're back. :)
TeejWhomHasLostedHerPassword chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
-you've finished something! -I'm so PROUD OF YOU! -you've grown in the fanfic world farther than I am now. -congrats. -as always, this was extremely excellente. -whoopah!
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