|Reviews for In between words|
| Different Child chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
| SemiPrecious chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
your descriptive writing was wonderful, you captured the imagery really well. also you did an excellent job of speaking of a sexual relationship between the two women without sounding like a porn writer, something to be admired, since subtlety seems to be lacking in the fanfiction world these days... sigh. Blatant sexuality is all well and good, but a K rated fic featuring the two women is always welcome... so, kudos to you, and i look forward to reading more of your creations!
| lurk-a-lot chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
I like your introspective view of Integra's thoughts in a moment of solitude. It's interesting to see how different writers view the various characters in moments outside of the scope of the manga/anime.
I really only have one criticism of your story & that is you need to use a spell checker/thesaurus. What on earth is a 'pult'? It is used several times in your fic, but I am no closer to understanding what it is supposed to be.
Aside from those minor criticisms, I like your oneshot. Cheers. _