|Reviews for Bleeding Through|
| angst lover chapter 26 . 3/19
Ok. First of all that was probably one of the most terrifying stories I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Scared me witless, so I guess you've done your job. It was certainly filled with suspense and it was heart stopping. Definitely entertaining. Definitely worth the read. I honestly was quite thrown off by all the past lives and all the myths and different names and the beginning of the unshaper, honestly a bit confusing. And man was this sad! You killed Dr Director! She's one of my favourite characters and that superintendent guy, when I was just starting to like him, he died! And poor Sensei, he was such an awesome character and he also died! Depressing much. I can understand that it adds to the realism of the story, but still! I was a bit confused on the fact that they cant remember, what cant they remember? surely they remember that the world was going to end by this unshaped being. was it that they forgot the chaos that ensued? Now unto my favourite parts; I loved the interaction between Bonnie and Kim and their conversation in the hospital, really beautiful. I loved the interaction between Shelia and Kim's mum when she was doing one of the tests and they had that talk, it was filled with angst and made me want to shake the mum and tell her to forgive Shelia already, I loved that even though she couldn't forgive Shelia she held slight remorse in the way she treated Shelia. I loved the final meeting between Kim, Ron and sensei. I loved seeing the joy from shelia when she first woke up to see Kim in the last chapter. I do think there could have been much more interaction between the two. I loved seeing Felix being able to walk and just generally the happiness on everyone's faces that they survived. What I didn't like was that after all that Kim's mum couldn't forgive Shelia, I hated how she asked to forget everything and I hated that everyone forgot everything that transpired, it honestly made me feel really empty. It makes you feel what was the point of this whole story if nearly everyone forgot what happened in the end. Empty and there's nothing inside, not a feeling I like to have at the end of the story to be honest, especially a story that was so very well written by an author that obviously has seriously amazing writing skills. But if that's how you wanted the story to end I cant say anything more other than my input...but I do think it would have been better if you let them remember, maybe they forget who Tenant (evil shego) was but other than that they retain their memories and Kim's mum being finally able to forgive Shelia. Not the ending I was looking for, but an ending nonetheless. Thank you for the time and effort that you put into this story and thanks for not giving up on it and for keep writing until you reached the end of your story. Well done on such a master piece (but it could've done with a lot less intimate moments) you have the gift of a writer and a good one at that. I do hope you wish to continue with this world, it would be mighty interesting.
| MagicornIs1 chapter 26 . 7/16/2016
That. Was. Deep.
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 26 . 4/10/2016
Some very interesting ideas you have there, hope they do eventually come out of your mind. This was one of the two best Kim Possible fics I have ever seen, thank you so much!
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 25 . 4/10/2016
Very nice end. I tend to dislike rewriting minds in fics, but you made it good. Very much liked the engagement
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 21 . 4/10/2016
Wow, very good stuff here for Sensei, including laying out what exactly he had done with his life
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 20 . 4/10/2016
Like the call to arms with armies of darkness. Like the prophecy part too
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 19 . 4/10/2016
Keep thinking of how good Monkey Fist's end was. Sensei gave it good too
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 15 . 4/9/2016
"I don't care about child labor laws! Get those Possible Twins working for the Defense Department!"
Great descriptive work for Monique's scene
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 9 . 4/9/2016
Very good scene with Ron confronting Sensei about how he unlocked his powers. Obvious suspicions and very good response from the old man
| JohnnyG33 chapter 26 . 4/24/2014
After reading the Bleeding Through series for the fourth time, they still haven’t lost their touch. This series is one of best I’ve read in the Kim Possible fandom and by far one of the best series on . Here’s why:
The Plot: The overall plot in this series is original and extremely creative. Perhaps the most amazing part of this series is that every aspect of the plot connects to the original canon of the Kim Possible Universe. (The series takes place up to and after the movie 'So the Drama', so anything that happened in season 4 is non-existent, but that is OK.) While the plot is much darker than anything you’ll find in Kim Possible, it doesn’t deter from the show or character’s charm while offering terrific character development and depth. Readers will be riding the emotional roller coaster along with the characters as they work their way through the plot.
The horror in the story is perfectly done, slowly building up throughout the series and then suddenly all hell breaks loose. The horror element makes readers feel small and helpless and keeps readers on the edge of their seats, constantly wondering what will be the fate of our heroes. This story also succeeds at keeping readers on their toes, trying to figure out what is going to happen next.
The other elements also represent themselves quiet well in the story, but I’ll let you figure out what those are for fear of saying the other tropes or elements would give too much away.
The Characters: This is the best aspect of the entire series. The characters stay perfectly in character from start to finish while adapting to the new situations that the plot throws at them. I do not want to give anything away about the characters, but I will say the attention to detail, even to the background and those in the background are amazing and only add to the depth of the story. I will also state that my favorite character was Master Sensei, for of all of the characters in this series, he was portrayed beautifully, 100% in character.
Cannon vs. Fiction: Creativity is the name of the game in , and Mattk pulled no stops while connecting elements of his fanfic series to the original KP canon. If readers stop and think about some of the connections made in the story, they will find that the connections make sense and could have very well happened in the canon, (if Disney wanted to take the series down a darker path).
All in all, this series is a master piece. Do not let the lack of reviews or favorites deter you, this is a hidden gem that will be a joy to read from start to finish.
Mattk, I don’t know if you still read reviews, but nonetheless thank you for writing and finishing this series. It was a wonderful stroke of luck that I found it, and a privilege to read it. I am currently reading your other work and am enjoying them immensely. My only question was what were you thinking while writing the epilogue? Were you originally setting up another series in your KP universe, or were you insisting other readers to continue it while you turned your focus to personal work? Again, thank you so much for this wonderful story and for the all those that you haven’t written or published yet.
| Guest chapter 25 . 9/24/2013
I just read through all your Blood series, and I absolutely loved it. I especially liked how Kim and Ron grew up a bit and started to develop a deep, mature relationship. Great job.
| oldandnewfirm chapter 25 . 1/31/2013
I re-read "Thunderheads..." through "Bleeding Through" for the second time after being out of KP fandom for a few years, and I was delighted to find that it's just as great as I remember it. It's an ambitious tale that delves into a level of maturity that the show couldn't have accomplished even if it wanted to, and melding the comparatively carefree cast with the harrowing, bleaker world you've crafted isn't easy to pull off, but you managed it beautifully. Though there are some rough spots- I thought that the several chapters of Kim and Ron training at Yamagouchi dragged a bit, for example- it's overall a wonderful story, and one that really sticks with you long after it's over. Reading it again was a true pleasure, and I look forward to re-re-reading it in another five years!
One question, though- as you've left fandom I don't expect an answer, but perhaps one of the other reviewers will pipe in- what exactly do people remember about Drew and Sheila after the Unshaper's defeat?
It's clear that Sheila et al still remember being Team Go, which makes sense: they were Team Go long before they knew that the source of their powers was the Unshaper, so their memories would revert to a point before they became aware of the Unshaper's influence on them. In Hego, Mego, and Wego's case that would be before they were called in by Global Justice, and in Sheila's case that would be before or shortly after she slept with Drew.
My assumption was that the world's memory of Drakken and evil!Shego would be erased as well, but the Crash Damage epilogue specifically mentions that Shego was reported dead after the battle at the Space Center. The problem is that Sheila is still very much alive, so unless the world has been made to forget that the Gomez family were Team Go- which seems unlikely, given that no one seems surprised that the Gomez family was present in the aftermath of the battle- then it won't take people long to point out that reports of Shego's death were highly overrated. And also to point out that she's still a wanted criminal, along with her partner in crime Drew Lipsky, both of whom would have no idea what their accusers were talking about.
I know, I know, I'm thinking too hard. But I just can't work out how the magic could erase Sheila and Drew's memories of being Drakken and evil!Shego without ALSO erasing the world's memories of that as well. It's been niggling at me for days.
| holydemon00 chapter 20 . 1/24/2013
I'm sure I should have recognised the name " " but I can't. Who is he?
| holydemon00 chapter 14 . 1/24/2013
Was the scene in Middleton a reference to Stephen King's the Mist? Bunch of survivor stuck in a supermarket, surrounded by weird shit (for some reason I was pretty fascinated when Kim used the words, btw)
| holydemon00 chapter 4 . 1/24/2013
Well, I see a flaw in Sensei's logic. What about Monkey Fisk, DNAmy, Dementor, Killigan, the Seniors, are they all infected by Evil Dark Magic? In particular, the Senior becomes evil because of Ron, and they aren't above dropping a chained Kim, sealed in a coffin, into a bottomless pit filled with water and sharks. I bet every spies and agents around the world would prefer getting raped and tortured to such scenario.