shockingly great. Good story of two lovers over time and space fighting to be together... /tear down facee

I'm sorry to say, but I don't have the time right now to give you a just and deserved review of this fic as a whole, but I will leave you with this:

This fic is one of the best stories I have read in my 21 years of life (probably top 30, and considering how much I have read, that's quite good). You don't skimp on the realistic violence, yet you didn't overdo it for violence sake. You wove each character in such as way that, even with Fredrick, I felt their deaths and the tragedy therein.

You have great potential as a writer (I say "potential" only because you can't publish this work without breaking a few rules here or there) and I hope that one day you find your big break.

Fantastic ride and, now that it's over, I almost don't know what to do with myself

That. Was. AWESOME! You have a flair for making the characters come alive, and for capturing their voices. Awesome story arch. Can't wait to read original works of yours.

"Author’s Note: I went into a few touchy subjects in this chapter, and I’m afraid there will be more in the next. I hope I don’t offend anyone, but I’ve read quite a few stories where Shego’s original name is (understandably) Gomez or Gonzalez, but none that dealt with the implications of that. I just figured it had to be done."

I felt it was a fairly provocative thought process, and well-written and integrated into the story. Well played.

this is one of the best kp stories i have ever have talent, no doubt about it. i hope you write more, cause i waht to find out what lynn is up too. please?

BTW, this reminds me of "The Prometheus Files" by Niquest. you should check it out.

Really enjoyed this story I must admit that this is the first that I've read of a supernatural fall out of A Sitch In Time. You really did your thing with this story as well as all the others that went along with this story line. Also giving a lot of a writers a good jump off point for when writers block is kicking their asses. I really enjoyed this, good stuff.

brilliant

Such an awsome series that i dont even know where to start.

So i will leave it at that.

Awsome

man, i really like this series you have created. everything well thought out with no plot holes that i can see anyway. everything from Kim getting injured to Ron going Magician was well written and didn't get dragged out and boring. the support characters like Monique, Bonnie, and Sensai were all very well incorporated into the plot and overall feel of the story. the past lives thing i thought was very cool along with the dreams. the thing that most impresses me and kept me reading was the massive amount of myths, legends, and religion you were able to jam into this without making it seem cliche and unbelievable. the magic and history of creation was along with the little snippets of what is happening around the world really kept the pace going. how the world was degrading and how long forgotten creatures and phenomenons were appearing again. i cant really for the life of me explain how much i love this epic series that i have read in the last 16 hours or so but i want you to know that i am really glad you took the time to write it.

Raver for your cause,

Ernest.

Great story. I'm guessing there were a few other stories that would have been good to read before I read this one, (a small note in the start of chapter one would've been nice), but still. extremely enjoyable read. )

Well written, and some of it was so dark and gory it just made my skin crawl. But that was one of the things that made it so great, the skin-crawly-ness-ness! I'll be sure to check out some of your other work now. Thanks for writing one of the best KP stories I've read in a while.

-Jawelik

truly an epic! wonderful!

Once again, a great chapter. Just one question: what does FTS mean?

I just want to say that if Disney ever makes an adult KP movie, I think that it should be made from the Blood Bond stories.

I'm loving this sotry as much as Bleeding Out. Just one question, what does "cuando los hombres hablan en la sala, las mujeres se lavan las nalgas" mean?

Definitely an 'Afflict the comfortable' moment there. I got tingles. Hoosha Kim, hoosha.