Reviews for Torn Between Two
missmanga90 chapter 3 . 7/15/2006
This is really good jus what I have been looking for chapter 3 . 6/15/2006
I loved this story. Very nice. Could be longer in the chapters though. but good job
kawaii.sasuke chapter 3 . 4/3/2006
It would be very interesting if you were to continue with this! _

I hope you do, and if you ever feel like writing up another chapter, you should do it! :D
Shinkou Makurayami chapter 3 . 3/20/2006
It's mildly entertaining, way too short though, and has almost no plot evolution as of yet. Keep writing, It'd be interesting to see where this goes.
haru hari chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
Haru: Hmm...its different, this might end up being good, depending on what route you take with it.

Hari: Grammar and spelling are fine, overall its a good start.

Haru: I just might continue readin this.

Hari: No! Go finish your other stories!

Haru: T_T