Reviews for Sunflower Daises
emmy.raen chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
I really like this one-shot. :) I really like how you write this pairing. Its more in character than most of the fics I've read on this site. Ever consider doing another one-shot or a full length? Of course, a Sasu/Hina would be just as lovely. :] I hope to read another fic from you soon.
braindamage730 chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
nice story
Wandering Wonderer chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
I have a few stories that I go to read when I don't feel like writing myself. The stories I choose to read are the same ones every time because the plot is beautiful and realistic, Naruto and Hinata are always in character, and I relate to and gain experience from the style of writing.

This story is one of those few. I don't know why I haven't reviewed or faved this earlier, just know it is one of my favourite stories.


I love the line:

"Sh," he breathed, nuzzling noses with her, his voice a husky purr. "Don't try to talk. Don't move."

I love Naruto's character in that moment. It's very believable that he would grow up to become like that. Romantic...
sexy hinata chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
that was awsome i love it HAPPY HOLYDAYS
Romez chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
Damn it to hell that was pure genius! I tried writing like that and it sucked! Teach me! lol.
Silver Warrior chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
aw, so sweet and fluffy!
chocolatelover1 chapter 1 . 5/20/2007
Ahh, so cute! loved it! lol

Keep up the good work!
lil-c-girl2218 chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
Aw, that was so cute! Hehehe, Naruto and his pervy thought
Necrokon chapter 1 . 4/4/2007
This is great with minimal amount of mistakes.
dragunzahurr chapter 1 . 3/25/2007

naruto's a pervert!

but it was cute

Del Nayar chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
Loved it! An extremly well made NaruHina fanfic! I hope that you continue to write such good fics! Good gramar, few mistakes, and Well placed fluff! Kep up the god work Hooah!
xXxUnPrEdIcTaBlExXx chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
that's SO cute! !
Imprisoned Fire chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
If you suck at fluff then I must not have realized the sky is pink. This is a good story. It's very well written, kept in character. I wish I could think of a good way to describe it but my minds thesaurus doesn't want to work right now. But it is good, and you are a good writer. Continue. That is all I have to say, continue.
Le' TEACUP and SCENEx chapter 1 . 9/18/2006
naonaonao chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
That was extremely awesome! Real cute, and kept in character. It's one of the few FanFics that I read over and over again until I get to the point where I can recite it by heart. I REALLY think you should continue and make it more than a one-shot.

I liked that one part, "Mine... mine... mine... mine... mine... mine... mine... all mine..."

Pure genious. And I agree, Hinata stutters, but not that much. Unless it was because of the swearing or w/e. Heheh... I look forward to more of your stories.
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