Reviews for Elysium
Nanda Magnail chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
nice and sad
meatballs in the impala chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
Sad but it's very nice nevertheless!
twilighthack chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Short but insanely touching.

I've been reading through your fics and you've just a talent for choosing the right words. Keep it up.
Rikku Madara Uchiha chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
Love it. So sad, though. I still loved it. Jesus, I have to check out the other stories you wrote... Keep Writing Proud!

~Rikku Madara Uchiha~

Welcome to our world. Where the living die, and the dead rise. ~ Kakashi Hatake and Obito Uchiha~ Door Number Two by Reaper Nanashi (Lady Shinigami)
DesertCat chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
thats so sad...
Hzleys87 chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
Short, but beautiful. I never tire of reading fics that are about Yondaime's last moments alive with Naruto. Yours is one of the best I've encountered. I'm glad I found it.
Shulblaka Saphira chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
That was rather sad...
Relala chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
The moth careens to the ground.

AWE! that was so sad.

i dont kow why i like reading sad stories..but all of yours are so SAD! i love them.

especially this one.

because of the moth.
Eldr-Fire chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
... That was... beautiful...

"I failed you today, Naruto," he says. The baby gazes at him with wide, innocent, trusting eyes, the eyes he used to have. "All you'll remember of me are the stories they'll tell you," And stories lie. Stories forget the truth.

I'm simple blown away by your literary talents.
AnimeSiren chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
Ohh, i like. The moth motif thing was a fine add to it also.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
Good work.
Sailorprincess3234 chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
Hum...well...I must say, this is my first time reading any fanfic with Yondaime in it...he is pretty hot *sigh*

Anyway as far as this little fan fic goes...I must nearly made me cry. I applaude you for that...Usually it would take a lot for me to I lied about that. I'm a sucker for romance! This was so beauitful! I was a bit confused at first...but just brush that thought a side...and the name for the story is really intresting...hense the reason I'm sitting here reviewing. This really did rock! Great Job! Hey by the Naruto, who is your fav. charter? Just wanna know...
wdango chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
...I like it.

T_T I'd like a request?


Gaara's POV when Yasha-kun tried to assassinate him...

:P After that we can compare...

Of course, I can never beat you, but I try...


Check out my stories!

I was "FF User 647404".

:3 Go!
Sandstorm626 chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
I absolutly love it.

You have great timing. I just came back from a school field trip over the weekend and there was alot of drama going on, and I ended up being the victim of backlash bitchiness.

You must write more. You rock everything you write.

til next time...
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