Reviews for Rotting
Red Tale chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
Hi,

It's a really well wrrtten story but I think the summary and intro need to explain the character better. I had to go dig out my old school Archie comics to figure this out (FYI, you should specify that this was the Archie universe). A lot of people are not going to know what this is refering to at all, and I think that's why you have no reviews. Even after reading it, although the story makes more sense I don't understand why you would write it.

And writing a chapter about Wyrm wouldn't make any sense either unless you did some serious background to get people interested. You do have good writing ability so I would like to read more by you.