|Reviews for The Eternal Sunshine of a Spotless Mind|
| alanacrystal chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
I loved this story! A very realistic and in character fic. If Dranzer had not returned to Kai, I could easily imagine him acting distant and 'starving himself to death without realising it' as you so beautifully put in; Dranzer is a part of him and without his beloved phoenix he feels like he has nothing to live for and nothing matters anymore. Hence the possibility that he will eventually become a lifeless shell or suseptible to the darkness that he had resisted before Hilary joined the team.
Hilary's thoughts and worries about Kai were portrayed really well and the fact that she only overheard things about his past is realistic too because there's no way Tyson or the others would want to burden her with such dark tales. I imagined her watching the movie at the end of the story (trying to forget about her concern as there would be no use in helping Kai because he wouldn't want her to) but approaching him not long after anyway.
| kono yona usotsuki chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
it was really deep...i do feel really bad for Kai...keep it up.
| Sam chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
i actually loved it. The most realistic fanfic so far. I think that the creators of the show ruined the ending by having Dranzer appear again...but I really liked the title. It sounds depressing, but it fits.
srry if I reviewed twice...can't remember anymore...
| dong-chun-mei chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
wow... how it's almost creepy how deep you can dive into things. do you often sit there and let you mind wonder about stuff like this? wao... it's amazing i don't understand how you can write like this all the time.. you should really consider writing a book... i would definately by it! Oh would ou do me a favor and check out my first story, it's called Passing Time
| Kyuusaisha Bleeding chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
It was really good. Very interesting. Wonderful insight.
| wolf's lament chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
It was really well written. A very unique idea and an amazing one shot. I wish I could think this well at that time.
It would be really awsome if you made a fic out of this.
| HiddenPortrait chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
That was really good. This style of writting suits you well. To be hinset i love these stream of concsiousness (Sp?) fics! The only thing i could criticise is spelling but its getting so much better! I really enjoyed this as it left me thinking without being tyoo ott depressing! BRAVO! heh heh love tiffy
| DJ Sharingan chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
Great One-Shot again, you rule as always Lamanth.
| Iluvbeyblade chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
Okay, that actually scared me! Poor Kai, going quietly mad. Are you going to carry it on? Please do, even if it's just one chapter on him "going deeper and deeper. And she was shore that one day he just wouldn’t bother to come back." It is so good, and so freaky! Bye-bye!
| phoenix-shalimar chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
WOW GIRL THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL I ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT THE PART ABOUT KAI CLUTCHING HIS BROKEN BIT CHIP ALMOST MADE ME CRY I DIDNT GT TO SEE THT EP COS MI ANNOYING COUSIN TAPED OVA IT BEFORE I GOT TO WATCH IT BUT JUST WOW IM LIKE TOTALLY SPEACHLESS KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK I ABSOLUTLY FCKN LOVE READING YOUR STORYS THEY MAKE ME FEEL HAPPY SPECIALLY WHN IVE HAD A CRAP DAY AND ALL I WANT TO DO IS KILL MYSELF SO KEEP IT UP YOU INSPIRE ME AND MAKE ME FEEL HAPPY UR DOING A GREAT JOB SO THANK-YOU
OH AND IF U WANT SOME-ONE TO CHECK UR WORK FOR SPELLING MISTAKES GIVE ME A HOLLA I CN HELP IF U WNT
SMILES AND HUGS
| Nubia chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
this was... I have no words for it. I can't describe it but that's a good thing. ok so don't think its bad
it was..it went in depth about Kai. I liked it!