|Reviews for Descent into Darkness: The Sacrifice for Salvation|
| rachell chapter 6 . 6/6
ariel D u did it again you made me cry lol (when I thought tai was going to die) your character building throughout the series was incredible and I loved your portrayal of a drow coming to the surface and his views on life.
thank you for making my long nights enjoyable xxx
| dmichelle312 chapter 5 . 1/31
You're so good at writing battle scenes. And that's a nice fic you wrote there...
| Ordis chapter 6 . 3/15/2014
I am in love with your Jarlaxle and Entreri.
| freak-joy-spastic chapter 6 . 9/22/2012
I finally finished it! Twice I got to where Mordacai got to the ruins, but then something else would require my attention and the story would go neglected, but finally I got it finished. Hazaa! I never expexted him to get turned into a snake. Guess he really did mget his comeupence. Poor braid boy though, i was just starting o like that drow. ...Now on to the next one. I am positively shaking with excitement. XD
| Kitsu Kurasei chapter 6 . 6/29/2008
Heya, been reading the whole series past few days (It's awesome.) *clap* Of course, I am perfectly capable of dredging up the spelling mistakes, but I'll leave that be for a while. Huggles to a fine writer~!
| Andi chapter 6 . 4/25/2008
That was absolutely incredible! You nailed Artemis and Jarlaxle, the story was amazing (I love little Tai _), and you are a very skilled writer. If you've never thought of writing your own book, well I would give it some thought if I were you.
| Nuitari Aquarius chapter 6 . 4/5/2007
Thank you for the nice reading ,
you brought me in your dreams,
and that is a gift I do appreciate !
| SchattenTanzer chapter 6 . 1/23/2007
That is so awesome!
| Sadina Saphrite chapter 6 . 7/17/2006
I must admit, it's been a long time since I've read your work. Haven't gotten around to it. But I must say that, as always, I am impressed.
Good work! I gladly await the next trilogy, and also the next chapter of Music and Men. _
| Thargor the mighty chapter 6 . 7/7/2006
ok so I've read everything you've written, I know I shoulda reviewed before this but I got so caught up in reading that it escaped me, I even printed chapters off and took them 2 work with me, plz keep up the wonderful work ~thargor
| Surreptitious Chi X chapter 6 . 7/7/2006
I am glad that the epilogue attempts some closure. Jarlaxle still worries me about his surface empire schemes and his convenient overlooking of what friendship requires of him to feel.
| Surreptitious Chi X chapter 5 . 7/7/2006
Artemis is going to be alright. For a moment, I thought Tai would die - that must be a testament to your writing, because it came alive so vividly.
| Surreptitious Chi X chapter 4 . 7/7/2006
I'm concerned about Artemis and Jarlaxle and their friendship, and concerned about Tai, and wondering what's going to happen because Mordecai's trying to return the mirror to be uncursed after Jarlaxle would most likely agree it's too late. I hope Jarlaxle reconsiders his surface empire. He keeps on shrugging off that feeling.
| Surreptitious Chi X chapter 3 . 7/7/2006
I feel sorry for Mordecai because as Jarlaxle said all along, he's NOT very bright, and that mirror is taking what he has from him. I'd like to think, after the crystal shard, that Jarlaxle would throw away the mirror if he felt oddly confused, threatened, and was itching with eruptions of scales all over his body.
| Surreptitious Chi X chapter 2 . 7/7/2006
Jarlaxle's very complex. I couldn't help but notice that he was sweating profusely, checked one of his magical items, and then let everything lead straight into bantering without really verbally dwelling on the heat or the erratic pattern of Mordecai's travel.
And Artemis has developed incredibly. The things he's beginning to say reveal the much lighter side of him- his sense of humor. And it makes -sense- for him to have the one he has. His development is a logical progression. It's awe inspiring.