|Reviews for Gravity|
| The JAM again chapter 1 . 10/31
Feh. Chuckie should have slammed the door in her face, but if he did, where would this story be? :D :D :D
| Lord Shade chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
I have to say, this is looking mighty promising. I don't know where this is going or how its getting there, but I kinda like that. Its a mystery.
And the whole "tough love-for your own good" thing was VERY entertaining. I love that that's her explanation for being such a bully to the kids. That whole conversation had me grinning like a fool.
Chuckie is in for one helluva ride.
| belle6900 chapter 2 . 7/18/2013
Is it weird tht when I was reading this I automatically knew they were driving a car...
| Dragonblaze66 chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
Those angle want to make out without with carrot top soon? It will be realy funny if u put a lemon in later chaps!
| Zephyrus-Prime chapter 6 . 6/10/2011
This is an *awesome* fic. I'm begging you, dude, finish it! It brought back so many fond memories of my childhood and some of my thoughts as a kid in high school.
Seriously, don't make it another 4 years before you update.
| Hejin57 chapter 6 . 3/24/2011
This is certainly quite the tale, I must say.
First off, your characterization is perfect. Actually, I might even go so far as to say that you characterized the characters better than the writers of the show could have. But I expected just as much from you, considering your work in Operation: MOTHER(a story I for one would like to see continued, if I might add)
I can't help but see a little of myself in your writing. You're going back and forth on a couple stories it seems. I can relate to that. I tend to do the same thing. Still, your stories are very high quality when it comes to execution and overall content. All in all, they're just great, simply put.
I hope that you choose to continue this story one day. I believe it might very well have the potential to be your best. Until then, good luck, Lord M.
| Anise Nalci chapter 6 . 3/6/2011
Does it matter? It's wonderful that you've decided to update, and apart from a typo or two, it's as wonderful as ever! I enjoyed it last time, and I adore it now. I understand if you're not feeling the mood now. It's OK for you to write how and when you want. It's your fundamental right, I think, as a fanfic writer who doesn't get paid!
(That being said, I do hope you update ASAP! XD No pressure though!)
| acl chapter 6 . 12/13/2010
great chapter please update soon
| Choas dragon chapter 6 . 11/27/2010
Great story. I like how it's progressively getting there unlike other stories I have read in the past where the author just rushes through it. Really admire how you went out of your way to try and make the characters as realistic as possible.
I know your probably stretched thin as it is but I was wondering when the next update would be coming out?
| Relaxing Pikachu chapter 6 . 8/13/2010
This story is great so far! It's a shame that it's been such a while since you updated last.
What I like best is how you're trying to strengthen a bond between Angelica and Chuckie and how you've written such an interesting background for Angelica and Chuckie over why bother act in the way that they do.
I really do hope you come up with another chapter soon. I'm dying to know how the rest of the trip will turn out and if either Chuckie or Angelica will open up a bit more to one another.
| Jae B chapter 6 . 7/10/2010
I like where this is going, and I also like the fact while Chuckie's friends know him well, they're without a clue. Angelica's introspection is interesting as is her subconscience. I'd like to see more of Chuckie's thoughts. It's funny, the use of the name Chuck reminds me of Charlie Brown for some odd reason. Maybe there's a correlation there? lol Keep up the great work and keep on writing.
| Lady Azura chapter 6 . 5/7/2010
I've been watching a lot of Rugrats and All Grown Up reruns lately, so I decided to check out some fanfics and stumbled across this little gem. Now I'm addicted, and I blame you.
Please update soon! I'm dying to know where you're taking this!
| Acepilot6 chapter 6 . 4/28/2010
Great to see that this story hasn't stopped! I love the depth you give your characters and often get the feeling that things aren't quite what they seem. Great insight into Angelica, and the scene in the Java Lava worked well (I like the overprotective little sister dynamic with Kimi, it's very in character, you don't see it often enough).
Can't wait for more! I'll keep feeding you Tertiary if you keep bringing me this...
| April-1 chapter 6 . 4/25/2010
I fell in love with this story.
The tell of two kids running off to see America's sights.
| Dark Gotham chapter 6 . 4/14/2010
Very cool story !I like it so far.