|Reviews for Of All the Girls in the World|
| andinify chapter 23 . 3/5
I just came across this today and I know you posted this like 8 years ago but heh, screw that. But overall:
Wow. Really wow. I don't know what to say this is just so enormously wonderful and I can't even find any words that could do this story justice. I love Derek. A LOT LIKE YOU CAN NEVER IMAGINE. This got my heart racing and pounding in anticipation that I kept wishing they somehow managed to break the curse before Derek's birthday and I just-
I'm going to cry.
Cecelia... Ana... oh I love their friendship. I love how Ana is sooooo supportive and a bit like the Queen who relentlessly played the matchmaker xD oh I did adore the queen so much as well. She's definitely one of a kind.
Adrian and The Dark Mage, though...
You have made such a beautiful piece. It enamored me a lot in a sort of extreme kind of way that I just- I'm obsessed with this story. I want to read the sequel but since I noticed the summary saying it's in an indefinite hiatus... I didn't. Since you write so wonderfully, I'd hate to be stopped in reading a great story because the writer's in a hiatus. That would break my heart.
I'm rambling here. Well, shortly, this is amazing. Everytime I read your story I feel the need to exclaim that aloud. You're amazing! Like I said before: keep writing! :)
| Guest chapter 13 . 2/10
Omg Adrian reminds me so much of prince Hans! (From Frozen)
| lollipop addict chapter 22 . 12/22/2013
This was amazing. You swept me away. Love it.
| Aria chapter 23 . 10/16/2013
I absolutely LOVED this story! The only thing that threw me off a couple of times was when "King Tristan" suddenly switched to "King Rafael" and vice versa.
| bookwurm247 chapter 5 . 8/24/2013
I thought the curse was on Cecilia's family? And what is the curse?
| bookwurm247 chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Woohoo! Go Franklin! I like this dude! :)
| MELUVBOOKS chapter 23 . 7/21/2013
| nerdsrock chapter 8 . 6/9/2013
Lol, i have like, your whole plot figured out now... I FEEL SO SMART! ;) but really, your doing a great job and you were really great about dropping little hints, they werent blatantly obvious but they werent ridiculously veiled either... Good job!
| Brimo chapter 23 . 5/15/2013
i love this so much... read it all in one sitting! beautiful BEAUTIFUL writing :)
| Princess LaLaBlue chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
I loved this story, very, very, very much! Thank you for creating a wonderfully imaginitive tale that inspired me to write my own fairy tale spin off! Thank you again!
| angeloflight89 chapter 23 . 4/9/2013
I got really confused about the Tristan and Raphael character. It took me a while to figure out that they are the same person... I think. But I really loved this story. It is so unique that if it were longer with more detail I would have bought it off amazon or something. ;) Great job.
| Rebekah chapter 22 . 3/6/2013
Ah, I really really liked this! It was really well written, good job!
| Devil's-Smile chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
I'm going to go with a Beauty and Beast theme here, right? Sweet!
| Shy at Heart chapter 4 . 11/11/2012
Love what you did with the places' names
| miasopapia chapter 15 . 10/30/2012
I regret not having commented earlier, but I was just speeding through this story. No doubt, the best moment was just before the kiss, when Derek asked permission (twice) to embrace Cecilia. Marvelous!