Reviews for Unrequited
foodaddict chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Oh, I wish you'd update this. I love where it's going so much. How would you like me to beg?
dounut chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
This was good. It was nice to see a different view of inutashio.
Diary chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
I enjoyed this.
L337CH1X0R012 chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
Wish you would ezpand on this story instead of just making a one shot... It's incredible. I really like how you portray the characters... doesn't seem out of character at all.

Later.
JazkaStar chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
You should like write a sequel to this about what happens afterwards.

JazkaStar
JazkaStar chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
I find this a rather interesting story...a different take on why Takemaru hates Inutaisho. Somehow, I'm not sure how much it suits his (Inutaisho) character, but then we aren't told much about him. Because there is still a chance for change at the end of the story.

In other words...you have a well written story.

Wow. This is one of my better reviews.

JazkaStar
koishii-tenshi chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
I really liked this story. It made me wish that there was more of it, and more Inu-no-taisho stories. Anywho, I'm going to look into more of your stories, and you're going onto my favorite's list!
kag0me chapter 1 . 11/8/2006
wow... now that's what i call jealously and, well if i knew the word i would say it right now, but since i don't i won't... ok? interesting, i've never seen this coupling before and it kinda took me by surprise. and when takemaru said 'i love you', it made me think of the third movie when he killed izayoi and then tried to kill inutaisho and i was saying to myself, "wow, what a weird love triangle! Oh well, he doesn't love you back, GET OVER IT!" i though he was sorta an idiot, but at least he had a fun time with his fiancè... while he still could anyway, cuz we all know what happens next! JA NE _
Venganza152 chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
A wonderfully dark fic. I don't like the thought of Inu being conceived out of spite though. I think I could live if you stretched this fic out a little bit, please. I would like to read more.

Peace, for now!
Bellebelle3 chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
Wow...Inu no Taishou is evil. This is very interesting and wonderfully written. Updates are loved.
Darcia Plushie chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
*glomps you* yaoi is love. I really like this oneshot _ so nice (can one honestly use that word for this...? XD)
Numisma chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
Hey, I remember reading this when you were entering it at and since deepdown we're all review whores, I figured I owed you a review since I hadn't left you a comment over on LJ.

So, um, yeah.

Good stuff. -thumbs up-

It may be a rarity, Inupapa yaoi, but sometimes being rare is a good thing. We need more well-written yaoi. This is a start. Yay!
Quinn Anderson chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
O.o Such an interesting take on things...and for a pairing that I've never even heard of before, let alone read. I must say, I'm intrigued, and when I found out that you had branched into yaoi, I quite openly did a little dance of joy. Now, if only you'd write Sesshoumaru/Inuyasha or another pairing I could get more into...

But, that's not what I'm here to talk about. Your story has been fabulous so far, and I take it there will be subsequent chapters? I'm eager to read them, if so. I'd like to see if Inu no Taisho's rough nature with Takemaru develops into something more.

Wonderful descritpions and conflicting emotions, as always, and I look forward to hearing more.
Cepheid chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
Hey, this Cephie from lj with very much love indeed for our esteemed dark!fic-queen for answering my Inupapa Yaoi Challenge.

Gushing aside, my only complaint is that Inupapa's character is a little flat considering much of the story is told from his perspective. I like your not-quite-porn erotica scenes combined with this more vulnerable aspect of Takemaru and am, overall, very satisfied with this.
Ranuel chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
*stunned*

A totally original take on things that does not violate what we know about the characters. The relationship between Takemaru and the Inu no Taishou is the sort of thing that did go on in that period. I could see this Inu no Taishou as Sesshoumaru's father more easily than the version usually portrayed. I much perfer that Inuyasha be born of love not vengence but Izayoi still has time to win his heart.
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