|Reviews for Hotel Tropica|
| DavidC20OfficialWriter chapter 1 . 11/22
For some reason, this fic reminds me a Colombian TV series called: El Cartel de los Sapos
the betraying between the drug lords and the people involved in that in a non-stop action...
Well, Kim and Ron get save from the criminals and the situation is not looking good for them!
Want to see more in a future!
| Drakonis Aurous chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
Well written. Nice to mix in a little fluff as well as some action. Too bad Kim and Ron's honeymoon at Hotel Tropica was ruined
| mac-c chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
hey! There are some things about your story that got my attention (namely the fact that it takes place in Venezuela and im from Venezuela:D yay) I thought that the way you treated the fact that cops are mostly dirty here and that mostly drug and band lords are the ones who truly rule most of our remote places is very acurate. It's a known fact that in Venezuela political relations with the united states are currently dodgy at best and I think you got that right (the reason Global Justice can't interfere)... the question is why Ron and Kim didn't know that if they are studying social studies?...anyhow, that's a minor thing, but what I though you might change to make it more real is eliminate the last names of people when any hispanic person is talking. We never say anybody's last name unless we are calling on the whole name (saying señor/don Carlos Díaz is ok, but not señor Díaz, in that case you would say señor Carlos). Another thing is that we are notoriously familiar with people (if not downright offensive and rude to those who don't know us), if the hotel manager had said something sly to kim that ron hadn't liked or even to ron himself (not to kim, to women, men are surprisingly simpatic), it whould not have been rare (and it might have added a bit of humor to it ;) )...in other words, im saying he was too polite to be real hehe:S
anyhow, that's all i had to say but let me tell you that you are one of a select few authors that I have read that really understands most of the Latin situation:D anything I've said are minor errors that only I would notice cause I'm from this crazy place were terrible atrocities happen but nobody says anything because everybody has lost hope that things might change...keep writting:D!
| warprince2000 chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
Very cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story you write (update soon Plz)
| HILLARY MOORE chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
you need to make some more stories.
| Bubbahotek chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
Very well thought out story. Good job