|Reviews for Hatal Fart Attack|
| MeinGimli chapter 1 . 2/16
a hatal fart attack? did his fart did ignite the gases? i suppose you meant a letal heart attack. a heart attack from wich he died in the you write an minichap to that one. he let go one mega fart and they fall all unconscious because of the gas attack. then you would have to deal with NBC troops at least thats what i translate our ABC troops
people trained to deal with this kind of shit
| PaulBlay chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Nice! I shall have to check if you did a sequel. I think it has possibilities.
| Heksy chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
Hm, having read your other work I must say this ending is anything but satisfactory.
| Random number generator chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
Absurd premise, title disjointed with the story, unfunny and it is proof that originality and ability to write is not enough to produce a story.
| Luiz4200 chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
| paganwoman chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
I have read this story a few times and it gets funnier each time. Especially now that someone is writing a sequal to it. The author is doing you proud. I wish you would write more, your stories are great. Thanks
| lefkaz chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
cool... and then?
| HeirofSomebodyImportant chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
xD I read the title as 'Fatal Heart Attack' not 'Hatal Fart Attack' xD LOVE IT
| sneaky lunitic spy chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
haha i love this
| noylj chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Did Vernon suffer a heart attack?
Did Liz find out about Harry from Bumbles?
If so, why would she believe him?
I can not see any HUMAN being permitting Harry to go back to an abusive home-particularly without 24/7 protection.
| OokamiJudge chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
*cackles* ooh that was /sweet/!
| Miriam1 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
This is sweet. It occurs to me that you might enjoy GenkaiFan's "Quoth The Raven, Nevermore."
I like your idea of Harry Potter protecting the young princes from Dudley's bullying. The Cinderella aspect was wonderfully unavoidable.
This was a fun story to read.
| Runecutter chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
Exquisite! Just Exquisite!
| Abused Wide Bellatris chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
Hehh hhehehh hehehh.
That's all I have to say.
Hehh heheheheh. Heheheheh.
| akan chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
ha ha! :)